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- Novice Review:
- Good plot so far, but theres some stuff you should work on before ranking up!
- Your terrain is nice, and i like its dynamic shapes. The palette is good, and it doesnt appear to be too smooth.
- Your plot is seriously lacking in structures. Theres two houses and a built-in underground, but theres gotta be more. If you dont want to focus of structures, you could always make a big build so you dont have to make so many little ones (recommended), and then you can focus on your organics or terrain.
- The detailing on the builds however, is good, and the depth is okay, though there could be more.
- The organics on the plot are good. The mushroom is nice and the tree is good, but it gets a little too thick at the top. However, having the two by themselves makes little sense on the plot. Bring them throughout the plot to help them make more sense. More trees and mushrooms are always a good idea :p
- Your sea monster is cool, but its a little flat. Theres no definition and theres no depth to it. Its also coming out from the grass underneath the water, and that doesnt make too much sense x3
- Good plot and keep at it :p
- Good luck!
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