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ch 3 the days that i lived in the past(unedited)

Jan 20th, 2015
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  1. this chapter was quite exciting there were parts that i might have missed due to me being excited to know
  2.  
  3. what will happen next. I was so curious what will happen next so i didn't stop translating till i was done with the
  4.  
  5. chapter.
  6.  
  7. 【】 <- how the heck do you type this?
  8.  
  9. ep3
  10.  
  11. 10 years,i definetely heard that.
  12. Thats a lie!. (TL: which is better Lies!! or Thats a lie! like acting to reject the reality -delete this-)
  13. Did I live undergrond in that dungeon for 10 years?
  14. It seems that i remember taking off the clothes i wore that had become too tight. (TL: change this so that it
  15.  
  16. doesn't sound suggestive -delete this-)
  17. I think my body size has grown according to my age that has grown older.
  18. I continued to use whatever monster pelts to cover my body.
  19. That is what i'm wearing now.
  20. that right, weren't there curious gazes toward me because of my appearance when i arrived in this town.
  21.  
  22. "Roel, do i look weird?"
  23.  
  24. "Yes, but that doesn't matter you know?"
  25.  
  26. She immidiately replied as if paying no heed to it. It may be not on intention to say that.
  27. What a good girl. (TL: it could also be a good child so its up to you which sounds better -delete-)
  28. If I think about it, Kurinka was also kind. (TL: implying that she is also a good kid -delete-)
  29. Come to think of it, this girl also somehow resembles her. (TL: its sounds weird with the previous sentence
  30.  
  31. used think of/about it if possible think of other synonym for "come to think of it" to put -delete-)
  32.  
  33. "Ryua-san, your card has been delivered"
  34.  
  35. I recieved the card from the guild person who called me.
  36. Amazing, it even has a picture of me. (TL: you're surprised of that?)
  37.  
  38. "Good for you, first of all you rank is D, that and you level is. . . . .. . .it still hasn't been measured/inferred.
  39.  
  40. (TL:ED i leave this to you -delete-)
  41.  
  42. "Level?"
  43.  
  44. "It represents the numerical value of how strong you are. Its also the same with the dungeon's danger level.
  45. It becomes the standard for comparison/checking. (TL: the last part is implying that level is something to use
  46.  
  47. to compare or something like that -delete-)
  48.  
  49. Danger level. When i was a kid, I heard if from the swordsman that saved me.
  50. it was something like a level 1 adventurer should go to an apropriate dungeon with a danger level of 1.
  51. thats right, If i remember correctly didn't that person also taught me about the strange conditions.
  52.  
  53.  
  54. "Ryua-chan, want to try measuring your level? Once its measured, the card will record it you know"
  55.  
  56. "yeah, I went to great troubles so i want to try" (TL: crap getting excited my english suddenly broke i leave this
  57.  
  58. you ED -delete-)(TL: crap getting excited)
  59.  
  60. Roel went to a black iron box where the first person came out from. (TL: uuuuh getting excited is bad for my
  61.  
  62. translation can't be help since I'm excited about it, anyway its implying the there might be another boxes so
  63.  
  64. roel went to one where the first person that came out from the boxes,uuuh something like since exchanging
  65.  
  66. places with the person who just got finish doing the stuff also be sure to put "First" "inside or from" sorry
  67.  
  68. about this -delete-)
  69. I wonder how many others are there.
  70.  
  71. "eh~, are you lying? I'm still at level 4! Isn't this thing broken?"
  72.  
  73. A man came out scratching his head, staring fixedly at the iron box. (TL: fixedly sounds weird -delete-)
  74.  
  75. "fufun, as just as i expected of me. My level is already 18." (TL: fufun is something like a laugh of great
  76.  
  77. confidence or something like that -delete-)
  78.  
  79. Next a female magician with a flashy appearance came out.
  80. she is waving her adventurer's card as if showing it off.
  81.  
  82. 【Iraaza Lv: 18 Class: Wizard B rank】(TL: イラーザ(iraza) hmmm, Iraza, ilaza, eliza)
  83.  
  84. "Isnt it amazing, that person. B rank, thats already a veteran you know"
  85.  
  86. "yeah"
  87.  
  88. "now Ryua-chan try entering it" (TL: its finally here XD)
  89.  
  90. "Eh , wait a minute my heart is not ready yet"
  91.  
  92. "don't worry its gonna be fine, Its not like its going to eat you"
  93.  
  94. I was pushed behind towards into the Iron box.
  95. Then, I heard something like a vibration and a ring of light pass trough my body starting from the above to the
  96.  
  97. bottom. (TL: probably like a body scan)
  98. at the end something like screen was projected before my eyes. (TL: like a status screen it said slab or
  99.  
  100. board but didn't want to use that-delete-)
  101. I wonder whats written on it?
  102. The door opened given that lets try asking Roel.
  103.  
  104. "Roel, how do you read this? 9998 level?"(TL: WTF!)
  105.  
  106. I understand the number. but with the exception of what was written.(TL: crap concentration is off again due to
  107.  
  108. excitement anyway its imply that she only knows how to read the numbers i leave this to you -delete)
  109. I feel like something like this was not the level.
  110.  
  111. "well that is ..., arere?" (TL: i dunno the english equivalent of "arere" TT_TT)
  112.  
  113. after little while she looked at the screen, Roel called out to the guild person to ask why.
  114.  
  115. "error 9998 this series of numbers *taken back*" (TL: try making the *taken back* into a sound effect of being
  116.  
  117. taken back if possible -delete-)
  118.  
  119. For some reason the guild person flipped and turn over the pages of a massive book with one hand.
  120. Roel silently stared at this situation.
  121.  
  122. "Over flow? well but, the largest this thingshould measure is 100. sorry, but this thing is somehow broken
  123.  
  124. please try the other ones"
  125.  
  126. "Understood. Let's try that one" (TL: actually the "one" here and the "thing" at previous statement meant
  127.  
  128. machine/instument/appliance/aparatus but not sure how to use em -delete-)
  129.  
  130. It was another iron box similar to before however, again it showed something weird.
  131.  
  132. "ah, hmmm? is this also broken?" (TL: damn just admit it already!!!)
  133.  
  134. When the level 4 person saw the whole story, he cried. (TL: prepare to cry again soon fufufufu)
  135.  
  136. "Try and look at that! As i thought thats broken isn't it!
  137. I thought it was weird you know. My real strength should have already passed over level 20
  138. properly do the maintenance ! see ya!" (TL: I think this guy just triggered a bad luck flag or something)
  139.  
  140. He was a happily humming a song while going out.
  141. from earler the Iraaza lady determinedly walked this way. (TL: determinedly sounds weird TT_TT so i leave it
  142.  
  143. to you-delete-)
  144.  
  145. "wait a minute, what does that mean?
  146. Are you saying that the information this card recorded is a lie?"
  147.  
  148. "that one is OK, it probably broke afterwards"
  149.  
  150. "then thats good"
  151.  
  152. Then her peculiar shoes stopped making the drumming sound. (TL: the "drumming" is コツコツ kotsukotsu
  153.  
  154. which means (1) unflaggingly; steadily; untiringly; laboriously (2) clicking; drumming hope that this will make
  155.  
  156. things easier -delete-)
  157.  
  158. "I'm sorry, it seems like i was in a bad mood"
  159.  
  160. "Thats fine. . . ah, thats right"
  161.  
  162. I remembered my original goal.
  163. Lets try asking the guild person.
  164.  
  165. "Is it fine to go to Ikana village?"
  166.  
  167. "Currently that place is in a blockade
  168. as of now only a few people are able to go in "
  169.  
  170. "w-why?"
  171.  
  172. "since the village was destroy, around that area dangerous monsters has started to live there
  173. Every adventurers that entered it, was never able to come back.
  174. Afterward, the Aganbarde Kingdom established a restriction.
  175. at the present if you are not an A rank adventurer you won't be able to go in you know."
  176.  
  177. "A rank?! isn't that too much?"
  178.  
  179. "hou~" Roel leak a breath. A rank seems to be very amazing.
  180.  
  181. "What should i do?"
  182.  
  183. I didn't really know what to do and then Roel grasped my hand.(TL: YURI SENSOR ACTIVATED!!)
  184.  
  185. "then, if its fine do you want to see my house? or i should say currently i made the address of where you live
  186.  
  187. in that card is the place where my house is" (TL: the second part indicates that she made the address of ryua
  188.  
  189. the same place she is living at) (TL: Roel-chan gets 1 point from me XD)
  190.  
  191. I wonder why she is so kind.
  192. The other adventures are cold while , this girl is different.
  193. Even though i look like this, why?
  194. Once again my tears naturally overflowed.
  195. for 10 years, for the whole time i didn't notice because i focused on my aims when i was underground but.
  196. for the human warmth to be this warm.
  197. no, i should've known this.
  198. Its just that the last time i felt this was 10 years ago.
  199.  
  200. ------------------------------------
  201. (TL: wasn't able to translate this part properly due to me being tired)
  202. Monster book
  203.  
  204. 【Hell bear (ヘルベアー herubea】
  205.  
  206. the top reigning tyrant of the Bear Forest with the danger level of 30
  207. Many confident veteran adventurers whose first encounter with it
  208. got their dead bodies teared apart by it.
  209. Its has a strong pelt, thats why its a priceless material of a good robe.
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