naiaratta Plot Review

Hello naiaratta!!

My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. lets start by talking about your structure.

Your structure has a nice shape/layout and a good palette but it's lacking detail and depth. Try using any wood stairs,slabs,fences,walls, to design your walls and make them look better and more realistic. For reference, go to ./warp depthtutorial

Your tree is really weird and doesn't look natural. Try to make your roots bigger and also make some branches. Add more leaves and air holes in the leaves for realism. I suggest adding more than 1 tree to your plot since you have so much extra space.

For your terrain, as if now, looks really flat and plain; It doesn't look natural and is too jagged and rigged. It doesnt flow smoothly. The bottom of the mountain is also really weird too. Try smoothing it out more. I like how u added the pond and sand as the flooring, but maybe u can add extra stuff for extra detail such as lily pads, sugar cane, flowers, sandstone(for the pond flooring). Also add more blocks to your terrain for variation because plain grass looks flat and dull by itself when it isn't next to a good hill/mountain. Try cobblestone, gravel, clay, anything that matches your palette. The cave is a nice addition, but with the rest of the terrain, it doesnt look natural.

I have decided that you still need to put more effort into your build and change a few things. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission. :D