xDraghun

plaanted Plot Review

Jul 19th, 2015
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  1. Hello plaanted!
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  3. My name is xDraghun and today I will be reviewing your plot. Lets start off with your structure.
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  5. Your roof is pretty nice but your walls need some work. They are lacking depth and detail. Try to use stairs/slabs to add some detailing to the walls because right now they look flat. refer to ./warp depthtutorial for extra help
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  7. Your tree is pretty decent and it's good that they are custom made. The leafy portion looks a little too spherical. Try to add air holes for a more realistic effect. Add some longer roots as well. Based on the extra space on your plot, I would like your to build more trees to fill your space effectively.
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  9. You terrain is pretty good and has some smooth hills. Try to add more blocks to it for color and variation such as cobblestone, dirt, green clay, etc. The middle part of your terrain is a little flat since its just bonemealed grass. The pink wool doesnt make sense and is a little strange. I like how you added flowers around your pond. It gives a more realistic feel.
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  11. I think you could work on your plot a little bit more and show some more effort with your organics/trees. Hopefully you rank up soon. good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission!
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