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- Novice Review:
- Theres a bit you need to work on before you rank up:
- First off the tree is far too big for the plot size. Keep it reasonable and keep the tree smooth (make sure theres no world edit spheres that you can see or else your work isnt done). The branches all go in one way and it looks like theyres holding a ball on top rather than leaves. Keep stone out of the brush when doing stuff like this as well, as it drowns out the colors and makes it look sloppy. The same brush for the leaves was used for the terrain giving your plot a very basic feel and giving it not much color at all. Change up the brush sizes and colors when doing 2 completely separate things. The terrain also needs to be smoothed out quite a bit. THe structures are very basic as well and need more to them. Make bigger structures and give them more layers and details to make them more interesting. Theres a lot of room on the plot that is wasted by the oversized tree so do keep that in mind!
- Good luck!
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