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- Novice Review:
- So you know i like the plot, but that lil thin bit is killin me so try and figure something out plsssss :)
- The only other things i would say about your plot is to fill the empty space above the water. that section of the plot is pretty vacant so it would be nice to see something there.
- Aside from that, decent terrain, good trees and good structure :)
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