negatives:

2-1 missed egg shot after jumping off of poochy. missed egg shots for stars after the autoscroller. got backup stars at the end of the level though.
2-2 sloppy red coin duplication
2-E missed egg shot/sloppy star room
5-1 missed a red coin dupe but grabbed a backup
5-2 failed bonus skip
6-1 missed the shot through the crate. failed bonus skip
6-8 2 missed shots on final bowser. 4-5 sec lost each

postives:

2-5 gold split
3-3 beginning of the level is smooth and flashy. in 2nd to last screen, precise egg shot with only a 1 block gap 4-5 sec. time save
3-4 sub shot. precise egg shot through the water to skip collecting maually with the sub
3-6 switch jump. frame perfect jump off of the switch as it falls. 13 ish second time save
1-E saved time over previous PB.
4-3 got the shell jump and helicopter skip at the beginning of the level. 3-4 sec time save each
4-4 whole level went well
4-6 level went well for the most part. 3 red coin dupes in this level.
5-4 skip 1st try (hardest trick in the game). 4 shot quick kill on the boss
5-8 saved time over previous PB due to a better boss fight. boss was kinda sloppy though.
6-5 1st try autoscroller skip. its a frame perfect jump to avoid letting the screen scroll up (which triggers the autoscroller). no bonus unlike previous Pb
5-E avoided a big time loss that my prevoius PB in the first room where i had to backtrack to get stars