Hi, first thank you for applying and putting efforts into the race once again.
This application is definitely better than the previous one and you gave extraordinary answers to most of the questions.
However, here are few things I would like you to go over :)

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[b]Question 4:[/b]
Please elaborate a little bit further about age, mainly it's social impact in the different sects.

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• Mentor: Having a mentor like yours is EXTREMELY rare, the fact Gregory is still alive is a miracle, this is accepted as 5pt.
• Deceptive Aura: I know this merit requires no explanation, but Aura reflects the true nature of one. Considering your character is a path follower there is no way this merit could be accepted.