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- Hey there!
- You're my first review since the system is back, feel proud ;)
- So firstly, I wanna say your plot, as it is now, looks totally adorable. I love the scenery you've created with the plants and various little things you've placed around. Your tree is really nice too, and I love how it hangs over the edge of the cliff, although I'd fix the leaves up a little bit, just because right now, they're a little too 'circular' and even. Try to make them a little more random, like a natural tree. I think your trunk could be thicker too. Not too much, but it just looks unsturdy.
- All that said and done, your plot is going to need a little more structure than you currently have. I love the curled spikes coming out of the water; it's really creative, never seen it before. As well as that, the bridge looks really good, I love the effect of missing slabs every so often. But other than those two things, you have no structure.
- A terrain plot can rank, but it would need more than you have here, just a little more atmosphere, maybe a cave. I think either stick to adding a small structure, a little house potentially, or add more to the terrain! But not toooo much :p
- Good luck!
- - Dutty <3
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