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May 18th, 2015
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  1. Hey there :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain. You have a nice amount of terrain, with good diversity and layers. There are some flat areas you could raise (the areas between the water. I really like the palette though, good choice of blocks!
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  5. Secondly, organics. Some of your trees are a little too thin in the middle, and a couple are too thick. The roots are also too /flat/, and not spread out as much as they could be. A couple trees also don't have roots at all! Make sure you add them.
  6. The leaves, remember you have world edit, so you can use a brush for the leaves! Just make sure you have a high air percentage in the brush.
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  8. Lastly, structure. I love the helicopter a lot! I also like the structures, but some of the detailing can be changed on some of them. The tower, you should add more of a curve to the stonebrick supports, so they don't go diagonal. I'd also suggest not using mossy cobble walls for detailing the entire wall!
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  10. Good luck!
  11. - Dutty :3
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