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- Novice Review:
- Decent plot so far, but theres some stuff you should work on before ranking up!
- For starters, your terrain is decent, but theres not much to it. The wall of terrain is generally uninteresting and the top is very flat. Add some more to the bottom of the plot to make it more interesting and dynamic, and try to rough up the top of the plot to add more levels to it.
- Theres a lot of empty space on the plot, so try to to fill it up with more structures, more terrain or more organics.
- The structure is decent, but try to add more to it, or more to the rest of the plot. As i said previously, theres a lot of empty space that ould be filled so keep that in mind. Also with your structure, try to keep to full blocks for the roofs, and keep the stairs and slabs for details :)
- Your organics are good, but they need to suit your plot better. Normally trees arent white with glass and webs in them, so if youre going with that, make sure that theyre more fantasy and fit your theme.
- I hope this helps!
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