ROSA – Approved

KYOUSUKE – Ugh, another fire manip. The enhanced leg strength needs to go (unless it’s just peak for his age and build). Otherwise, everything works.

KOISHI – Powers are fine, if a little odd. I don’t understand the whole third eye thing, but that doesn’t bug me. Things look okay. Something feels off when reading it, but there’s nothing wrong with the app in particular. Approved if you guys are fly with it.

SEN – The formatting makes it difficult to read. AU history needs to be longer. Couldn’t hurt to have a more well-rounded personality section, too. I like it, but it needs work.

CECIL – Dy, Dy, Dy, why do you always do this. Personality needs to be a hell of a lot longer. History is jumbled, but bearable; that said, it would benefit from a revision.

JOHNNY – See above. AU history is too short.

SONNY – Needs a much longer AU history, but otherwise solid.

RINOA – Elemental manipulation is okay by me, but the wings? Seriously? I’d suggest nipping those. Otherwise good.

TRACY – No to the fire powers. I’m sorry, they don’t fit what the player’s going for, and just feel superfluous and tacked on to make them seem ‘cooler.’ Otherwise a good, solid app.