Perception Check

Better first-POV voice than Cute Mutants, but still wonky in chronology.
Dower, should be dour.
Violet's got a pretty solid character.

May isn't that defined, for such importance.

Kai = nonbinary.
The noted of lack of gender pronouns in history.

Another grammar "I wish could."

Too many em-dashes.

Welp, that ending didn't hold back. Earth-cast is definitely allowed to be flawed and complicated, Velaryma's cast members are notably weaker. Character voice wasn't bad at all.