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- Hello Pvp_Power_!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off my talking about your structure.
- You have a good idea of what ur building but it needs more detail and depth because rn it looks a little flat and plain.
- Try giving it more blocks to add color and depth. The leaves add a little something extra to it but not enough.
- Your organics which are your trees are good since they're are custom, but you could work on them a bit too. Try making their roots longer and maybe next time give them some branches. But overall, they look fine for initiate rank.
- Your terrain is pretty nice and goes well with the plot. I like how you have a little farmland growing next to the stream. The small patch of sand/redsand doesnt really go well with the rest of the terrain, and for the bottom of the river, try to keep it sand and use other blocks that would well compliment it. I dont think your should use cobblestone. Try using birch wood or sandstone.
- Overall, I think you would be close to ranking by adding these few touches into your plot. Good Luck and I hope you have better chances with your next submission! :D
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