Setting: spaceship
Time: thousands of years ago

Annhilatrix:prepare the weapon
Henchman: its ready, boss.
Annhilatrix: boss?
Henchman: i got promoted?
Annhilatrix: do not patronize me. I am your highness to you.
Henchman: yes...your highness.

Henchman: Energy Drainer is aimed at the planet.
Annhilatrix plugs cables and wires into her body.
Annhilatrix: ACTIVATE IT, slave!

A ray of energy fires from the ship and bolts of electricity and energy surround Annhilatrix as the henchman looks back at her in horror.


On the planet after all life was destroyed a small craft appears out of the sky

Man 1: what happened here?
Man 2: she was here…


SPLASH PAGE




Setting: room in government building on a planet, year 4018

Man 1: the solar federation built the optical disrupter around this system to keep us safe from it!
Man 2: yes, but in doing so, we stopped all trade from the neighboring systems, this is not what the monarch had in mind, he envisioned galactic peace and prosperity! Security! The disrupter was a mistake plain and simple.
Man 1: do we not have that? There hasnt been a war in over 2000 years!
Man 2: a cold war is still a war, mikhail.
Mikhail: you mean the datas?
Man 2: precisely.
Mikhail: they keep to themselves and we keep to ours. We know theve developed teleportation technology, i dont want them to send over a weapon to us if we…

Zenla: piss them off?
Mikhail: crap.
Man 2: ill tell the Federation government they just sent their “best” man to piss off a bunch of terminators [can be changed to something else, i wanted the reader to know that the datas are not to be fucked with]


Mikhail to Zenla: why would you do that! You stupid son of-
Zenla: okay, youre not going to thank me for bringing back a teleporter?
Mikhail: By the Stars! This is the capital planet! Dont you realize how bad this looks?
Zenla: yeah, its pretty great, i had to fight over 100 datas to get it.
[flashback panel of zenla fighting 3-5 robots, shooting beams from his eyes and picking up a robot over his head]
Mikhail: Do you realize what youve done?!
Zenla: yeah, it means we can end this cold war and send a weapon to them! We can end the war before it starts!
Mikhail: dammit, zenla, we have to put you in a holding cell for this.

Setting: data planet

A robot is in front of a screen running numbers. An alert appears on a screen.
[im thinking the datas communicate like telepathically, so you can show thought bubbles of what theyre saying]

Data 1: unit 24601 is missing!
Data 2: unit 24601 is missing!
Data 3: unit 24601 is missing!

an group of datas run into a room searching through storage boxes

After a week:

A data stands in front of the leader of the datas: we still cannot locate the missing unit.
Head Data: use unit 24611 to teleport to the location of 2601. Bring a Combat unit with you.

Data: yes, leader.



A group of datas activate the teleporter and go through it.








Zenla is tossing the unit up and down in a prison cell (its a force field and not metal bars) and hears the datas running around outside and drops the unit. The datas are killing everyone in the jail.

Zenla: oh boy.
 A data appears in front of the jail cell
Data: where is unit 24601 where is unit 24601 where is unit 24601 where is unit 24601 where is unit 24601 where is unit 24601 where is unit 24601 where is unit 246-
Zenla just sees the data standing infront of him
The data fires a laser from his blaster and its absorbed by the force field.
Zenla starts cracking his knuckles
The data keeps firing until the force field is gone.
Zenla throws a punch and it goes through the robots chest. [or how ever you wanna draw him killing the data]
Zenla: here we go!
Zenla destroys the other datas.

Zenla jumps through the portal.

Zenla: oh no. what ever shall i do with all these machines around me!
Zenla jumps in the air and energy beams emit from his eyes.

He fights wave after wave of datas.









Zenla meets the leader

Leader: Return unit 24601 at once you miserable little organism!
Zenla: do i look like i can read your mind? I cant hear you!
Leader: all units! Secure unit 24611!
Zenla: look man, i just fought like hundreds of your little tin men, a fight with you is going to be nothing!
Leader: Secure the unit in a evacuation rocket pod and send it off the planet!
Zenla: youre not getting this unit and im definitely getting the other!

Zenla throws a punch at the leader
Zenla: one way or another!

Zenla and the leader fight.



On the capital planet, they get an alert saying the datas have launched a rocket

Mikhail: by jupiter! Theyve sent a weapon to us! We are all doomed! The solar federation is at its end! Curse you Zenla!

Man 1(holding a computer, or otherwise looking at technology): that rocket isnt headed towards us sir...its going towards the optical disrupter field!

Mikhail: its going to destroy the shield!
Man 1: scanner relays show no weapons onboard.
Mikhail: how fast is it going?
Man 1: 6 times the speed of light, and gaining velocity exponentially!
Mikhail: how long until it reaches the shield?
Man 1: hard to tell sir, minutes-maybe seconds.
Mikhail: velocity now?
Man 1: 60.45 times the speed of light!
Mikhail: will it pass through the field?
Man 1: we have...lost contact with it sir...it has left the field…
Mikhail: its out of the federation?
Man 1: it is indeed in deep space!
Mikhail: so theres data technology in deep space?!
Man 1: it would appear so.

Back on data planet:

Zenla and the leader are still fighting
Zenla defeats the leader.

Zenla thinking to himself: where is the other device?
Zenla looks at the device he has in his hands.

The leader gets back up and hobbles towards zenla
Zenla: where is the other one!
 The leader pushes a button on the device in zenlas hand
Zenla: i guess this one way to find out!
Zenla disappears and the leader collapses and dies.