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- Hello RePLaYGamingYT!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structure.
- Your structure has a peculiar shape to it but comes with some decent color. It is lacking detailing and depth thou. Try to push in your walls, then use slabs and stairs to detail ur walls. For more help ./warp depthtutorial. I love how you draped leaves over your house thou. :D
- Your trees are very nice especially since they're custom made, but they have a weird shape to them. Like the leaves only cover the parts where the branches go. Try to give the top more leaves. The fences are a nice touch btw.
- Your terrain is pretty flat. I like how you added block variation using the stone blocks, and ur hills are pretty nice. I would like to see bigger hills thou. so your terrain doesnt seem so 2dimensional. I know it'll be hard since your structure takes up most of your plot but just do your best.
- I think your plot needs a little more work done to it before I can rank you. Good Luck and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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