Reject 1045

I try not to rant when I see a bad SCP. I'd rather just give on piece of criticism, because there usually isn't that much to criticize.
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    SPC-1045 is to be allowed any item deemed 'safe' by Commanding 05.

First of all, "SCP." The SPC is the Shark Punching Center, which is not what you mean. Now, is an O5 going to decide on a case-by-case basis what we can give to one SCP? That's not even his job, it'd be the Site Director, who would draft a list beforehand and let the team work on it.

    Things excluded unless allowed

Durr duhurr hurr durr.

    consist of human teeth, or alcoholic beverages

How… oddly specific

    1045 Is allowed leave from SCP facility

"Yeah, we only contain them Monday through Friday, and we let em out on Christmas and Easter."

    in the pine barrens of northern Kentucky

That is not a description.

    but to be monitored by a high ranking security officer

Oh, okay. He has to use the buddy system.

    Subjects

Even if your grammar was okay here, your use of capitalization isn't.

    due to Subjects already solitary lifestyle

WE DON'T DROP SCPs IN THE WOODS TO REFLECT ON LIFE, WE FUCKING CONTAIN THEM. Isolation isn't exactly the Foundation's weakness.

    SPC-1045 is given a 'wage' of three thousand four hundred and twenty six dollars ($3426.00) a month

Where the hell is he going to use that money? Since supposedly, his "me-time" wouldn't involve going to buy a fucking Snickers, he's supposed to be contained and monitored.

    standard living arrangements in SPC Agent dormitory

Ya know, or we could contain him. But watevs.

    within Foundation site

If he wasn't contained there, where would he be? Meditating in a Kentucky forest? Oh… yeah…

    Testing in the form of a company physical discovered that subject's mouth could regenerate and grow new teeth in a matter of minutes and was absent of any sores or any and all forms of gum disease even though the subject has admitted to using many forms of cancer causing tobacco dips for most of his life since childhood and still does daily.

Wow, that is a long sentence. Now, as for the content, I have two things to say. One, presumably, there would be a point about which company he worked for, or at least something about how the Foundation gave amnesiacs to the workers there. Two, WHY THE FUCK DIES HE GET TO USE TOBACCO DIPS!??! You don't even mention that in the containment procedures, and tobacco dips are harmful, and considering that he doesn't show regenerative properties outside of his mouth, why would we let him hurt himself?

    cuts and bruises heal at the same rate as any healthy male

Just so you know, both of those are limited to the skin. "Further testing" would have worked better.

    Subjects family tested as well in on facility hospice in the guise of company provided Health care

You grammars make me head hurts.

    None showed mistreatment by Subject or any abilities as the father does.

His father has superpowers.

    SCP - 1045

No. Just no.

    a hunt for SPC-###

That's not how you black stuff out.

    the agents on arrival to the area stopped into a local diner for lunch.

In the future, you should probably proofread.

    Attached to the diner was a curio museum promising bazaar oddities

"A store" is what you mean, right?

    Per Foundation procedure the agents were to investigate for any SCP.

Eh… I'll let it slide as long as the rest of the discovery isn't stupid.

    'Marlo' (SCP-1045)

Why do you feel the need to suddenly announce his name? That should be farther up the description, if there at all.

    performed a trick for the agents for the sum of three dollars ($3).

This is getting stupidly specific.

Also, this is getting stupid.

    Subject offered 'job' at foundation hunting game for 'guests'

"Hey, he pulled a coin out of his ear? How did he do that, Daddy?"

"Let's bag him."

    subject admitted more powers than previously known

The fact that you refer to his properties as powers is not a good sign.

    If subject is given thirty-two (32) rotted teeth.

That is not a sentence. Not at all. Did anyone read this, including you?

    Due to the time it takes to gather a complete set of teeth from multiple class D personnel further testing is suspended until acquisition of a full set.

What, we take their baby teeth? Or do we set up a meet with the Tooth Fairy.

    SCP-1045-1 is a circular pond

This belongs a lot higher up in the article. Like, say, in the Description.

^^This entire paragraph is choppy, but I'm not going to copy-paste it, since it's mostly the same errors that have been mentioned before.

    SCP - 1045 to know the existence or true nature of the SCP Foundation nor come into contact with any SCP or class D personnel.

Why. The. Fuck. Not.

    Subject is to be given his pay in cash on the first of the month and returned to his family for no longer than two weeks at a time.

This is getting retarded. We fake deaths all the time. SCP-1045 is not a human per se, and WE ARE GOING TO CONTAIN HIM.

    Security personnel sent to contact SCP - 1045 are not to imbibe any liquor. Be it store bought or especially home brewed.

Stop. Pampering. Him.

    - C.O. Packer

Who? He doesn't even have a title.

    Any O5 or Agent who's request to go hunting with SCP - 1045 is to file for Vacation leave for no more than four (4) days.

I've had enough of this bullshit. He doesn't live in a suite, he is contained due to anomalous properties. He is not a VIP. Plus, O5s aren't even allowed to get near SCPs.

    1045-1 must be fed one (1) bovine once every month. If not fed tremors will occur in the local area.

WHAT THE FUCK. THIS IS SOMETHING THAT SHOULD BE IN BOTH THE CONTAINMENT PROCEDURES AND DESCRIPTION.

    One (1) underwater halogen spot light. Scuba tank with sixty (60) minutes of air.

These aren't sentences. Read your article before posting, please.

    One (1) combat knife.

As bad ideas go, this is one of them. Maybe a scuba knife, but there isn't even anything in the pool except for teeth.

    Testing on recovered material met no known DNA type.

I don't think you know how DNA works.

I skipped over the entire recovery log because it's harder to describe why that doesn't work. I'm just going to stick with tone.

In short, the idea is pretty meh. The formatting was pretty awful, but mostly the grammar, spelling, tone, and syntax made this effectively unreadable. I'd suggest a lot more lurking and practice writing in order to improve on those points. We do have multiple mechanisms in place on the site to help proofread, such as the chat and the forum, so I suggest using those.
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