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- Hello dklrobinson, I am Tayter_Kat and ill be reviewing you initiate plot...
- Well I remember reviewing you plot, so ill keep this one short.
- First off, thank you for fixing what I told you. There is one thing that needs to be fixed, and that is the terrain. It is flat. Try adding more holes and hills around the plot to make it more realistic. Everything is else looks great!
- Good Luck
- -Tayter_Kat
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