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- Novice Review:
- Cute plot, but theres some stuff i think you should work on before you can rank :)
- I like your attention to detail with the layers of stone and the cobwebs as the splash from the little waterfalls, but the plot needs a few more things to really give it that kick :)
- First you should get rid of the bonemeal trees and try to make custom ones instead. Bonemealed trees dont require ay effort or skill so we like to see how you do with custom :)
- Fill the middle is more terrain as well, the edges have mountains but the middle is flat. Theres no transitions, so try to work on that. Also the gravel/sand spheres as the mountains isnt always the way to go x3
- Lastly theres no structure on the plot! You need to show us that youre able to make a structure with layers (depth) and appropriate details in the form of slabs, stairs fences or what have you! The structure can be anything from a house to a tower to a castle! Up to you!
- Good luck!
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