Tayter_Kat

Illinosx

Jun 29th, 2015
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  1. Hello Illinosx, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to barns. Your house is nice, but its lacking depth. Depth is the layers within a build, and you can achieve this by adding trap doors, buttons, slabs, stairs, and fences onto or into a build/wall. Also, you can use other materials instead of just wood. Try using stone or cobblestone or whatever block you want that still fits your pallet. A pallet is certain block that you build with that fits a them.
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like trees, flowers, and animals. I love the little bear head, it is a nice touch. ON the other hand. bone mealed trees are not accepted, but custom trees are. Custom trees are trees that you make your self; you make the tree. Make sure when building them, the trunk and leaves should compliment each other. The trunk should not be a twig but neither a huge log. The leaves should flow together instead of being boxy.
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is the ground, like cliffs and hills. Your terrain is very flat in some areas. To fix that, add more small hills and craters all around your plot to make it more realistic.
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  10. Good Luck<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Jr Mod
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