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  1. Working on the revisions now- however, I thought you should be aware of something.
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  3. In your own post- 'on A WHOLE' should be 'on the whole'. Additionally, you typed 'difficult to read TO DO A LOT of errors', which should read 'difficult to read DUE TO A LOT of errors'.
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  5. It should also be 'although your app is strong'.
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  7. As mentioned- I have been proof reading the app, and have already changed a number of things (I will work on the new RP example after my class), but I think you should check over your revision notices before commenting on my spelling mistakes.
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