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- Hello Seany!!
- My name is xDraghun and today I will be reviewing your plot. Lets start off my talking about your structure.
- You structure is really unique, I like it, but it could use some work. Your structure's walls could use some detailing and depth. Depth is the layering of blocks to make a build seem more detailed and realistic. Try adding some wood stairs/slabs to your walls for some detail and instead of using windows,i prefer fences, but that's only if your windows are one block big. Refer to ./warp depthtutorial for extra help. If you could, I would like you take make a second house on a side that isn't as crowded. For your bridge. try adding more detail than just wood blocks and fences. maybe you could detail it with cobble stairs, slabs, or walls.
- Your trees a really nice and I love how they're custom made. I could tell you really put some effort into your trees especially when you added roots. Next time, try adding branches for a more realistic effect. Also, try making different trees and not just the same kind cuz it can be repetitive.
- For your terrain, I love how you elevated your house using a small hill. Try to smoothen out your stream a little cuz the edges look jagged and not free flowing. Change the stream's floor to sand,sandstone,etc for variation and a more realistic feel to the bottom of it. The rest of your plot is just bonemealed grass, so try working with variation and use different blocks to add detail to your landscape.
- I think your plot is really close to ranking, but you just need to work on the things explained on here. Good Luck and I hope to see you as a Novice really soon :D
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