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R*Novice Review 26stempy

May 31st, 2015
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  1. Novice Review:
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  3. Nice plot so far, but theres a few things i think you should work on before youre ranked!
  4. First off id like to point out that, judging by the blocks with signs on them around the plot, you arent done x3 So tip number one would be to finish :p Anyway!
  5. The terrain is decent, it would be good to see more levels of it around the plot, but since you dont have much room theres no helping that.
  6. The trees are good though there could be more of them around the plot. The mushroom that you currently have, might have a stem thats a tad too thick, so maybe trim that down a smidge.
  7. The structures are decent, but theyre very flat and dont have much detail. Add more layers to the sides to create depth and detail it appropriately with slabs, stairs, fences etc, as you already have in the front of the houses x3
  8. Lastly I think there should be more structures on the plot. Weather it be more houses, towers or whatever you want, there should just be some more!
  9. Good luck!
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