my formula to great rp

Ricky’s example post:
ricky would enter the realm of the readman clan of vampires as he slowly walked he thought to himself * “i have been here before in a dream i think” he would then gently knock at the caste gates and await a responce from the royal family before he would enter the castle and when invited in he would kindly await bein spoken to before speaking himself so that he would not appear as a rude guest and when he was spoken to he would then greet the family and explain who he was and why he came here. <E>

1.the action line:
ricky would enter the realm of the readman clan of vampires as he slowly walked he thought to himself //he would then gently knock at the caste gates and await a responce from the royal family before he would enter the castle and when invited in he would kindly await bein spoken to before speaking himself so that he would not appear as a rude guest and when he was spoken to he would then greet the family and explain who he was and why he came here
2.the environment lines:
 toward the castle gates
castle so to say is environment
3.the conversation line(s)”**i have been here before in a dream i think”
4.the expression and bodylanguage line(s): is blanc for now
5.your appearance line’s): is blanc for now

Formula and order.
Basic : 5 diffusions, 1 action, 2 environment, 3.conversation, 4.expression and bodylanguage, 5. appearance. now the post is not build in that order. lets say i make this standard order, one can re-order as wished. 2,5,1,3,4. all fluently fused in one post.