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qazzy1122's Novice Review

Jun 19th, 2015
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  1. Hey there! :3
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  3. Firstly, terrain. I like the terrain you have - really creative in style and I'm loving the palette! It just needs a little more smoothing out, however. Right now, the world edit is a little too obvious.
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  5. Secondly, organics. You have none on this plot. We would love to see some please! (Apart from the egg like things in the top of the plot, but I'm not really sure what they're supposed to be!)
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  7. Lastly, structure. You have a prismarine shaped bowl(?), which I'm assuming is the nest for the eggs. It has a nice design to it, but isn't really too dynamic, or dynamic enough to pass as the only structure. I'm really unsure what this plot is supposed to represent, and it doesn't really have a clear purpose or story behind it whatsoever, apart from the eggs being in some sort of nest on top of a peek. Also the cracked egg makes me really sad :c
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  9. I think you need to add some more things to this plot that really help summarize the plot. If you want to stick with the eggs, why not make a large bird organic in the air? :D Some more structure of some kind is highly recommended, unless you can make some really great organics!
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  11. Good luck!
  12. - Dutty :3
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