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- Hey there!
- So firstly, I'll say this; I like the change from stone to wood. It looks a lot better and brings out more colour on the plot. Now you can get started on detailing.
- I'd advise you add some depth first, however. Your frame (The logs) you've built is on the same level as the wall - this can create some difficulty when it comes to detailing, as it ends up looking unnatural, and doesn't sit well on the structure. A simple frame is like this:
- https://imgur.com/ONsoRxh
- Use this as a guide to how your logs should be positioned with the planks.
- You have some large, open areas on the walls where detailing is needed, otherwise it's just wood, to put it bluntly. You've got good detailing on the corners; I especially like what you've done with the spruce stairs.
- (This part: https://imgur.com/qRtQHQY)
- Have some similar detailing to this all around - avoid 'shelfing' and slab spam.
- Shelfing is when you create a shelf-like appearance out of stairs/slabs. I can see it on your plot in some places.
- It may also be nice to add some more colour to the plot, like you have in the spruce area I pictured, with the black behind the stairs. Use some coloured clay in a similar way, maybe :)
- I'm not too sure what the exploding ball on the top is supposed to represent; I'm not sure if it's relevant entirely, and it may look nicer if you had a roof above the building.
- Good luck!
- - Dutty
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