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- Greg Malivuk
- http://www.pastebin.com/u/gmalivuk - Notes from all classes
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- Homework: Finish your paragraph about the career you chose. You can email it to me or write it and bring it to class tomorrow.
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- Exchange your writing and read your partner’s.
- - Are the topic and conclusion sentences good?
- - Do they do all the things they need to do?
- - Can you identify each of the supporting points and examples?
- - What transition signals does your partner use?
- Then work with your partner to fix mistakes.
- - Find and correct problems with run-on sentences and comma splices, like we talked about Monday.
- - Check to make sure word forms are used correctly, especially between nouns and adjectives.
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- Homework: Rewrite your essay with corrections and the correct organization. Email me with the text or with a photograph of your paper.
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