timing

http://i.imgur.com/XD6oOvL.png --> yes, keyframe failure on your part
Fixed line: Dialogue: 0,0:03:07.01,0:03:09.33,Default,,0,0,0,,I wouldn't be so sure. {Yet another keyframe failure}

http://i.imgur.com/6Eutd6Q.png --> 2nd mistake
Fixed line: Dialogue: 0,0:04:01.49,0:04:04.05,Default,,0,0,0,,You're just envious of the goddesses' powers! {This just shows that Commie has no clue about consistency: a few lines further up, they used the retarded localisation of goddess -> CPU, but here, they're using "goddess".}{Yet another keyframe failure}

http://i.imgur.com/nkSHiTn.png --> Bleed number 3
Fixed line: Dialogue: 0,0:06:07.12,0:06:08.22,Default,,0,0,0,,Better prepare yourself! {Yet another keyframe failure}

http://i.imgur.com/c407aXr.png --> I don't see any keyframe here, therefore lead-out is too long
Fixed line: Dialogue: 0,0:15:29.68,0:15:33.28,Default,,0,0,0,,My miracle is being negated! {Yet another keyframe failure}

http://i.imgur.com/zE3NF8L.png --> not snapped to scenechange (or keyframe if you wanna be anal about this term)
Fixed line: Dialogue: 0,0:17:44.00,0:17:45.16,Default,,0,0,0,,Thanks. {Yet another keyframe failure}

http://i.imgur.com/GrtOQOu.png --> no need to snap to a keyframe
Fixed line: Dialogue: 0,0:18:39.07,0:18:40.78,Default,,0,0,0,,That must've been hard. {Yet another keyframe failure}

http://i.imgur.com/LlFzBDZ.png --> that keyframe is fake, therefore snapping it eliminates needed lead-in for the next line
Fixed lines: Dialogue: 0,0:18:50.72,0:18:52.37,Default,,0,0,0,,Good heavens. {Yet another keyframe failure}
Dialogue: 0,0:18:52.37,0:18:54.71,Default,,0,0,0,,You're only getting her for today, okay, Vert? {Yet another keyframe failure}

http://i.imgur.com/ucyFO7j.png --> no keyframe here so I don't know what kind of failure you meant here

http://i.imgur.com/IPf2HD8.png --> video zooms-out here so snapping to the keyframe is up to timer's style (since there's no scenechange)

http://imgur.com/VedPbPS --> you DO NOT span titles and TS in general to keyframes/scenechanges unless they start there. Also, if that clip is yours, or you tampered with the line, then congratulations, but I don't see the title.
Title should start at 0:03:10.92 imo. (i don't have access to Commie's release to check)

Congrtulations, half of your "fixes" are nothing more but introduced errors. If you wanna time, make sure to load xvid keyframes generated either by you, or encoder. This file makes a difference: http://imgur.com/PaVJgdu (without loaded keyframes) vs. http://imgur.com/08fbpY0 (with loaded keyframes).