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  1. >The story starts at the beach. A boy with black hair was fishing alone with his old scientist buddy named Doctor. Miracle (real name: Mr. Fukuoka).
  2. >Doctor. miracle was a cool scientist that always trying to ask his neighbors to do wacky jobs. And he rewards them with a-lot of money.
  3. > He was acting crazier than usual. When He saws something lurking in the water.
  4. >The thing was bigger than the average fish and faster than a dolphin.
  5. >Doctor. Miracle wanted someone to get it for him.
  6. >The boy (who is named Jackie) was curious about this. He never has fun because of his studies and homework.
  7. >He asks doctor miracle if he can search around the waters for him.
  8. >Doctor. Miracle says that it could be dangerous for a kid like him to be going after a wild animal.
  9. >Jackie argue that he could capture the animal in only a day. He got some crazy tools in his dad basement.
  10. >But, Doctor miracle told Jackie that he can't catch the animal. Cause the animal is already gone from his radar. After he started talking to him.
  11. >Jackie was little disappointed, He thought he might get an adventure in his hands.
  12. >But, it was just another boring day for the skinny kid.
  13. >He walks back home with his starfish and clams. Trying to remember that he got a test tomorrow.
  14. >He saws a girl walking on the street with him, she was wet and covered in mud.
  15. >Jackie asks why she is dirty and the girl told him that a something almost drags her down to the swamp. Luckily, she escapes from drowning by the hitting the thing with a stick.
  16. > She says It looks like an ugly mermaid.
  17. >The girl slowly walk to her house and take a nice long bath. While Jackie runs to his house and grabs all of his dad supplies.
  18. >Jackie got fishing tools and fish for the mermaid
  19. >Mermaid took the bait and drag Jackie in the swamp
  20. >Jackie accidentally release his fish hormones bottle on the mermaid and turn her into a good guy.
  21.  
  22. >Mermaid put in his Jackie on a tree to keep him in one place
  23. >Mermaid went to the monster dinner.
  24.  
  25. >Jackie went in maggot pit and travel to another world "
  26.  
  27. >Then we meet the beast king and his minions
  28.  
  29. >The beast king and minions was eating forgotten humans
  30.  
  31. >Jackie interrupted their meal and threaten them that he will call the police.
  32.  
  33. >Beast king and his minions laugh at him and then beast king asks who bought the kid.
  34.  
  35. >The mermaid friends pointed at her and beast king asks her to come closer.
  36.  
  37. >Then the beast king ate her.
  38.  
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  40. >The beast king challenges Jackie in a game of riddles. If he wins, He will release her and allow Jackie to come to his world whatever he wants.
  41. >The game took a long time. Jackie answer 6 of riddles and Beast king only answer 4.
  42. >The last riddle was too hard for the beast king and he lost the game.
  43. >Jackie laughs at him and tells him to spit out the mermaid.
  44. >He spits out the mermaid and asks her to get out of here.
  45.  
  46. >The beast king got frustrated and put on a nasty curse on Jackie.
  47. >Jackie got really angry at the beast king and try to kick him.
  48. >The beast king grabs him by the collar, and he tells him to beware of his surroundings
  49. >He laughs at him and then transports him back to his home.
  50. >When Jackie woke up, He jumps out of his bed and grabs his bee-bee gun
  51. >He searches around his house and then outside.
  52. >His mother came home with his sister and mysterious cat.
  53. >He put on his gun on the cat and the cat didn't respond to his threats.
  54. >Jackie asks his mom where she got the cat from and his mother answered that the cat follows her.
  55. >The cat was too strange to be trusted. So, Jackie asks his mother to keep the cat in his room.
  56.  
  57. >Jackie regretted in doing that because the cat was looking at him all night.
  58. >Jackie was so scared that he went to his mother bedroom for tonight.
  59. >And the cat follows after him when he falls to sleep.
  60. >When Jackie woke up, the cat was gone.
  61. >He didn't question it because he was too busy preparing for school.
  62. >He will study the cat later, probably prepare himself for a monster attack.
  63. >When he is at school, things got stranger. Because of the doctor. miracle invented some something cool.
  64.  
  65. >He invented a thing that makes your reactions faster. He calls it "reactor 2000".
  66. >It was just a hat with a cool symbol.
  67. >Doctor miracle got another surprise! His test subject will be his niece called Hiya!
  68. >Hiya doesn't know much about English. He only knows yes or no, Hi and bye.
  69. >Hiya put on the hat and Doctor miracle tells him to hit his niece
  70. >Jackie throw a punch, And she easily dodges.
  71. >Jackie was shocked and put the hat on his head
  72. >Everything started moving slower, and he started noticing small details.
  73. >He was noticing cats watching him in the window.
  74. >Jackie quickly take off the hat and asks Doctor. a miracle that he could take a break and plays outside.
  75. >He says yes but only if he brings his niece with him.
  76.  
  77. >Jackie look at hiya and she looks at Jackie with her shiny eyes.
  78. >He didn't know how to talk to girls or play with them.
  79. >Jackie didn't want to deal with her, but hiya was interested in him.
  80. >Hiya asks why he doesn't want to hang with her, but Jackie tries to avoid that question. By saying he lost his cat.
  81. >Hiya was excited because he got a reason to use her uncle.
  82. >She put on the hat and notice cats was watching them.
  83. >Jackie wanted to use the invention without her.
  84. >He tries to used lies but hiya spotted them like flies.
  85. >Hiya grabbed his hands and pointed at cats and asks Jackie if one of them is his.
  86. >Jackie found it strange that cats started appearing around his school.
  87. >So, He chases after the cats and hiya follows him.
  88. >Hiya asks why he chasing after cats and Jack respond that he loves doing it.
  89. >Look at Jackie and she was confused by his attitude
  90. >More cats started appearing around and then disappear when they walk into the alleyway
  91. >Hiya got tired and sit down. Jackie started looking around the place.
  92. >When hiya look up, She asks Jackie a question.
  93. >Thanks to his limited understanding of Japanese, He asks hiya to be more simple.
  94. >She went to her phone, Translate her language and then shows it to Jackie.
  95. >It says "You notice those cats on the building", Jackie quickly look up at the sky.
  96. >There are hundreds of cats looking at Jackie and hiya, one of them throw a dead rat at hiya. She screamed in terror!
  97. >Her scream made the cats run away from her except for a black cat.
  98. >The jumps down without breaking her legs and come to hiya to comfort her by licking her hands and purring around her.
  99. >Hiya grab her and walk up to Jackie. She asks "Is this your cat"?
  100. >Jackie says yes and Jackie still thinking that the cat is going to pull something. But, The cat didn't anything.
  101. >Hiya give the cat to Jackie and then slap him in the head.
  102. >She calls him a weird kid, A weird kid that likes to chase cats all day.
  103. >Jackie didn't know how to respond to her. He never talks to a girl like her.
  104. >Hiya slaps him again And asks if she wants to play with her uncle invention with her.
  105. >Jackie decline her offer And say he wanted to go home and study.
  106. >Hiya gave her secret number/chatroom to him. She asks if he wanted to join her club.
  107. >Jackie didn't say anything and went home.
  108. >He laid on the bed and talking to himself about his day.
  109. >The cat laid on his chest and listen to his complaining.
  110. >Jackie mom was home and asks what he wants to eat for tonight.
  111. >Jackie didn't respond to her and started making weird noises.
  112. >Jackie mom went in his room and asks him about his day.
  113. >He told her about hiya and the cats.
  114. >Jackie mom was interested in this hiya girl.
  115. >It was the first time that Jackie ever talks to another kid that isn't his sister.
  116. >Jackie mom thought he was getting too lonely.
  117. >He didn't need friends, He got a-lot work to do and family to protect.
  118. >Jackie-mom giggle at him and walk out of the room. She tells Jackie that they are having pizza for tonight.
  119. >Jackie didn't want pizza, He just wanted to go to sleep.
  120. >So, he slept on the bed, while the cat looks at Jackie for the whole night.
  121. >When he woke up. He heard a scream coming from the kitchen.
  122. >Jackie mother was bleeding from hand.
  123. >She tells him she got a medkit to heal her hands or to stop the bleeding.
  124. >Jackie search for it around the house and found in the bathroom.
  125. >The cat sitting over the kit and staring Jackie with her emerald eyes
  126. >He tries to grab but the cat tries to scratch.
  127. >So, Jackie got to turn on the sink and splash water on the cat to make the cat go away.
  128. >It works and he grabs the med kit to help his mother.
  129. >When he got back to his mother, she stopped bleeding and started laughing.
  130. >Her voice started to change and pointed at Jackie.
  131. >A huge electricity beam shock Jackie and made him collapse on the floor.
  132. >A man come in his Jackie home and kiss Jackie mom for a job well done.
  133. >He was pale and wear old Englishman clothes, He calls himself "Phantom shock".
  134. >Phantom shock pity Jackie for crossing the beast king and being so stupid.
  135. >Walk closer to Jackie lifeless body and notice he is breathing.
  136. >Phantom shock try to correct his mistake by doing the final blow.
  137. >But, Jackie surprise him by grabbing him by the legs and making him lose balance.
  138. >He landed on a glass table and damage himself so bad.
  139. >He couldn't stand up, He grabs on Jackie mom and disappears with her.
  140. >Jackie still hurt by phantom shock attack and laid down on the floor. Thinking about how will he defeat that man.
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  142. >Jackie was dead on the floor and can't move his body.
  143. >He hears his sister crying and He was too paralyzed to help his sister
  144. >Someone was ringing the door. The doorbell causes the electricity to disappear.
  145. >Jackie was surprised that he wasn't paralyzed anymore.
  146. >He jumps up and answers the door
  147. >The person that was behind the door was hiya.
  148. >Jackie moans at her and allow her inside of his house
  149. >Hiya was here for books to take from Jackie mother.
  150.  
  151. >Jackie grabs all the books and tells hiya to leave. But, she hears crying from her sister room.
  152. >Hiya went into her sister room and notice something strange.
  153. >There was green ooze all over the floor, And Jackie quickly grabs her sister.
  154. >Jackie try to explain himself, he spills out all of his secrets to hiya.
  155. >Hiya didn't believe it and giggle at him.
  156. >Until the green ooze started making noises.
  157. >A recording of phantom shock tells Jackie to be prepared. He asks Jackie to fight him in the park at midnight.
  158. >Hiya was shocked and amazed by this moment. She thought Jackie was a superhero.
  159.  
  160. >When the recording stopped. Jackie sister was crying even louder.
  161. >Jackie didn't know how to calm down babies. But, hiya did.
  162. >She sings a beautiful song to calm down the baby.
  163. >It works and the baby started giggling like hiya
  164. >Jackie try to figure out how he going to beat phantom shock and save his mother.
  165. >Jackie hears the hiya song. He found out why he wasn't paralyzed.
  166. >It was noised! His electricity respond to noises! It is like that Raijin book that his father gave to him.
  167. "Whatever there is sound, There is always lightning to rebound".
  168. >Jackie got his old drums and try practicing his drumming.
  169. >He begs hiya to protect his sister.
  170. >Hiya asks Jackie why he hasn't called the cops on the phantom shock.
  171. >He answers by saying that the phantom shock probably kills his mother.
  172. >Jackie and Hiya grabs all of the rubber that they could find around the house and created armor for Jackie.
  173.  
  174. >Jackie fighting gear was rubber suit is made by 3000 rubbers, a trash bag. and condoms for his feet.
  175. >Hiya laughs at his armor and tells him to go kick phantom shock butt.
  176. >So, Jackie ran to the park and ready to fight phantom shock.
  177. >But, nobody was there in the park.
  178. >Jackie felt embarrassed
  179. >He sits down and waits for the phantom shock.
  180. >Waited for 4 hours. He still didn't come to fight him.
  181. >He started crying and felt lied to.
  182. >He should have protected his mother, He shouldn't have allowed this to happen.
  183. >The park owner was about to close the park
  184. >He notices Jackie was crying.
  185. >Parks owner asks him why he was crying and Jackie answer that he lost his mother.
  186. >The owner look at Jackie and try to hug him.
  187. >Jackie was uncomfortable about this and tells him to not do it.
  188. >The owner was being very aggressive.
  189. >He forces Jackie to kick him below the belt and run away from him.
  190. >The park owner started drooling blue stuff and started crawling towards.
  191. >Jack pulls out his drums and did a single drum solo
  192. >The owner stopped in his tracks and then pass out, big burst of electricity came out of his lifeless body.
  193. >Everything went silences for a moment.
  194. >Jackie prepares himself for the next attack.
  195. >He turns up his reactor 2000 and started drumming.
  196. >Jackie heard laughter from an abandon music hall.
  197. >The music hall used to be a popular place until the owner was murdered and become haunted.
  198. >Jackie run into the creepy place to look for the phantom shock.
  199. >The laughter turn into a beautiful creepy song.
  200. >Phantom shock tells Jackie that he knew that a stupid kid will found out his weakness.
  201. >But, It didn't matter because nobody can keep up his rhythm.
  202. >He was a general that sings a beautiful song to his enemies before they will die.
  203. >Jack was afraid, He didn't have the heart to beat phantom shock
  204. >But, he remembers that his mom is still in danger.
  205. >Fire came out of Jackie's eyes and he started drumming
  206. >He needs to think about that grandma song.
  207. >The song was sung by some goddess by some lake.
  208. >Jackie knew it wasn't the best song, but it is something.
  209. >Jackie started moving towards The Phantom."
  210. >And Phantom shock started laughing him.
  211. >He tells Jackie that the song can't help him.
  212. >But, Jackie didn't care, He doesn't get any ideas in his pocket.
  213. >Phantom shock got out of his hiding spot and started doing his swag walk.
  214. >Phantom shock blasts the drums out of Jackie and ready to do the final blow.
  215. >Jackie was blown away from the blast and landed on an old 90's guitar.
  216. >Phantom shock laughs at him and tells him to stand up.
  217. >Jackie didn't know what to do, He grabs on the guitar.
  218. >And started praying to whatever god.
  219. >He charges at the phantom and try to hit with the electricity guitar
  220. >Phantom shock quickly block his attack and laugh at it.
  221. >He told Jackie that his mom will be his slave for now on.
  222. >Jackie eyes turned red and he kicks Phantom shock below the belt.
  223. >With the full force of his might, He hits the guitar on Phantom shock head.
  224. >Then again in his shoulders.
  225. >Phantom shock was hurt, but he isn't down.
  226. >He tries to blast Jackie with his electricity powers.
  227. >but Jackie block it with his guitar.
  228. >The guitar absorb the electricity powers and started glowing.
  229. >Jackie was confused by the moment. He sees phantom shock freaking out and trying to run away from Jackie.
  230. >Jackie connect the dots and did the biggest guitar solo.
  231. >The guitar solo cause giant electricity explosion. Causing the phantom shock to be destroyed in the blast and turning the whole town dark.
  232. >Jackie was cover in ash.
  233. >He calls out for the phantom shock. But, he didn't answer back.
  234. >Jackie started freaking out that he kill a person.
  235. >But, Jackie notices a small crystal glowing in the dark.
  236. >He holds the crystal and notices a small phantom shock is trying to get out.
  237. >Phantom shock curse him and his family.
  238. >Jackie tells him where is his mom.
  239. >Phantom shock pointed at a room.
  240. >He opens the door and saw his mom in chains.
  241. >Jackie started shaking the phantom shock crystal
  242. >Jackie asks phantom shock, where is the location of the key.
  243. >Phantom shock didn't want to talk
  244. >Jackie threaten him that he going to smash his crystals to pieces. If he doesn't answer him.
  245. >Jackie hears the police and thinks he is going to jail for what he did.
  246. >He searches around the place and found nothing, the key was too small to see.
  247. >So, Jackie pull on his mother chains with all of his might! It didn't work.
  248. >The police walk in the music hall and found Jackie with his mom.
  249. >The captain of the police group asks Jackie about what happens in here.
  250. >Jackie told a lie.
  251. >He told the police officers that a gang beat up his mom and left her for dead.
  252. >Police officers thought it was strange for random criminals to do that, but they didn't care to asks more questions.
  253. >One of the officers found the missing key and free Jackie mother from the chains
  254. >The ambulances. came and help her to the hospital.
  255. >Jackie sat next to and started thinking what he just did tonight.
  256. >He felt guilty about not telling officers, he didn't want anybody to get hurt because of him.
  257. >But when he looks at his mother, he didn't know what to do.
  258. >When he reaches the hospital, he was going to give the crystal to polices.
  259. >But, He hesitated on telling the truth when he saw blood on the windows.
  260. >Jackie think that he could wait another day to tell the truth.
  261. >He spends a night in the hospital, waiting for his mother to wake up.
  262. >When it was morning, he heard his phone ringing.
  263. >Jackie answers the phone and hears a high pitch Japanese girl screaming at him.
  264. >It wasn't hiya.
  265. >It was just some other girl
  266. >He hears hiya laughing in the background, she sounds like she is having fun.
  267. >Hiya got on the phone and slowly explains what is going on.
  268. >Her sister is mad that a baby is in her room and she wanted to know why there is a baby in her room.
  269. >Jackie felt embarrassed that he forgot about his sister and promise that he will get his sister back.
  270. >Hiya wasn't bothered by it and she asks Jackie to come to her house quickly. Before she will run out of diapers.
  271. >Jackie turn off the phone and then pull out the crystal.
  272. >He asks phantom shock to help his mother, but Shockey didn't want to do it.
  273. >Phantom shock laughs at him and tells him that his mother will forever be in a coma.
  274. >But, Jackie ain't having that.
  275. >He shakes the crystal with full force and he threatens to break the crystal.
  276. >Phantom shock quickly asks him to stop. And he promises to cure his mother.
  277. >He shakes even harder and started screaming at him to fix his mother.
  278. >Phantom shock focus his power and broke the curse that he put on his Jackie mother.
  279. >She suddenly woke up from her coma and was really confused.
  280. >She asks why she is in the hospital?
  281. >But, Jackie made her forget that question by hugging her.
  282. >he thought that she lost her. He thought that she will be dead.
  283. >She got out of the bed and try to speak to the nearest doctor.
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