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- >The story starts at the beach. A boy with black hair was fishing alone with his old scientist buddy named Doctor. Miracle (real name: Mr. Fukuoka).
- >Doctor. miracle was a cool scientist that always trying to ask his neighbors to do wacky jobs. And he rewards them with a-lot of money.
- > He was acting crazier than usual. When He saws something lurking in the water.
- >The thing was bigger than the average fish and faster than a dolphin.
- >Doctor. Miracle wanted someone to get it for him.
- >The boy (who is named Jackie) was curious about this. He never has fun because of his studies and homework.
- >He asks doctor miracle if he can search around the waters for him.
- >Doctor. Miracle says that it could be dangerous for a kid like him to be going after a wild animal.
- >Jackie argue that he could capture the animal in only a day. He got some crazy tools in his dad basement.
- >But, Doctor miracle told Jackie that he can't catch the animal. Cause the animal is already gone from his radar. After he started talking to him.
- >Jackie was little disappointed, He thought he might get an adventure in his hands.
- >But, it was just another boring day for the skinny kid.
- >He walks back home with his starfish and clams. Trying to remember that he got a test tomorrow.
- >He saws a girl walking on the street with him, she was wet and covered in mud.
- >Jackie asks why she is dirty and the girl told him that a something almost drags her down to the swamp. Luckily, she escapes from drowning by the hitting the thing with a stick.
- > She says It looks like an ugly mermaid.
- >The girl slowly walk to her house and take a nice long bath. While Jackie runs to his house and grabs all of his dad supplies.
- >Jackie got fishing tools and fish for the mermaid
- >Mermaid took the bait and drag Jackie in the swamp
- >Jackie accidentally release his fish hormones bottle on the mermaid and turn her into a good guy.
- >Mermaid put in his Jackie on a tree to keep him in one place
- >Mermaid went to the monster dinner.
- >Jackie went in maggot pit and travel to another world "
- >Then we meet the beast king and his minions
- >The beast king and minions was eating forgotten humans
- >Jackie interrupted their meal and threaten them that he will call the police.
- >Beast king and his minions laugh at him and then beast king asks who bought the kid.
- >The mermaid friends pointed at her and beast king asks her to come closer.
- >Then the beast king ate her.
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- >The beast king challenges Jackie in a game of riddles. If he wins, He will release her and allow Jackie to come to his world whatever he wants.
- >The game took a long time. Jackie answer 6 of riddles and Beast king only answer 4.
- >The last riddle was too hard for the beast king and he lost the game.
- >Jackie laughs at him and tells him to spit out the mermaid.
- >He spits out the mermaid and asks her to get out of here.
- >The beast king got frustrated and put on a nasty curse on Jackie.
- >Jackie got really angry at the beast king and try to kick him.
- >The beast king grabs him by the collar, and he tells him to beware of his surroundings
- >He laughs at him and then transports him back to his home.
- >When Jackie woke up, He jumps out of his bed and grabs his bee-bee gun
- >He searches around his house and then outside.
- >His mother came home with his sister and mysterious cat.
- >He put on his gun on the cat and the cat didn't respond to his threats.
- >Jackie asks his mom where she got the cat from and his mother answered that the cat follows her.
- >The cat was too strange to be trusted. So, Jackie asks his mother to keep the cat in his room.
- >Jackie regretted in doing that because the cat was looking at him all night.
- >Jackie was so scared that he went to his mother bedroom for tonight.
- >And the cat follows after him when he falls to sleep.
- >When Jackie woke up, the cat was gone.
- >He didn't question it because he was too busy preparing for school.
- >He will study the cat later, probably prepare himself for a monster attack.
- >When he is at school, things got stranger. Because of the doctor. miracle invented some something cool.
- >He invented a thing that makes your reactions faster. He calls it "reactor 2000".
- >It was just a hat with a cool symbol.
- >Doctor miracle got another surprise! His test subject will be his niece called Hiya!
- >Hiya doesn't know much about English. He only knows yes or no, Hi and bye.
- >Hiya put on the hat and Doctor miracle tells him to hit his niece
- >Jackie throw a punch, And she easily dodges.
- >Jackie was shocked and put the hat on his head
- >Everything started moving slower, and he started noticing small details.
- >He was noticing cats watching him in the window.
- >Jackie quickly take off the hat and asks Doctor. a miracle that he could take a break and plays outside.
- >He says yes but only if he brings his niece with him.
- >Jackie look at hiya and she looks at Jackie with her shiny eyes.
- >He didn't know how to talk to girls or play with them.
- >Jackie didn't want to deal with her, but hiya was interested in him.
- >Hiya asks why he doesn't want to hang with her, but Jackie tries to avoid that question. By saying he lost his cat.
- >Hiya was excited because he got a reason to use her uncle.
- >She put on the hat and notice cats was watching them.
- >Jackie wanted to use the invention without her.
- >He tries to used lies but hiya spotted them like flies.
- >Hiya grabbed his hands and pointed at cats and asks Jackie if one of them is his.
- >Jackie found it strange that cats started appearing around his school.
- >So, He chases after the cats and hiya follows him.
- >Hiya asks why he chasing after cats and Jack respond that he loves doing it.
- >Look at Jackie and she was confused by his attitude
- >More cats started appearing around and then disappear when they walk into the alleyway
- >Hiya got tired and sit down. Jackie started looking around the place.
- >When hiya look up, She asks Jackie a question.
- >Thanks to his limited understanding of Japanese, He asks hiya to be more simple.
- >She went to her phone, Translate her language and then shows it to Jackie.
- >It says "You notice those cats on the building", Jackie quickly look up at the sky.
- >There are hundreds of cats looking at Jackie and hiya, one of them throw a dead rat at hiya. She screamed in terror!
- >Her scream made the cats run away from her except for a black cat.
- >The jumps down without breaking her legs and come to hiya to comfort her by licking her hands and purring around her.
- >Hiya grab her and walk up to Jackie. She asks "Is this your cat"?
- >Jackie says yes and Jackie still thinking that the cat is going to pull something. But, The cat didn't anything.
- >Hiya give the cat to Jackie and then slap him in the head.
- >She calls him a weird kid, A weird kid that likes to chase cats all day.
- >Jackie didn't know how to respond to her. He never talks to a girl like her.
- >Hiya slaps him again And asks if she wants to play with her uncle invention with her.
- >Jackie decline her offer And say he wanted to go home and study.
- >Hiya gave her secret number/chatroom to him. She asks if he wanted to join her club.
- >Jackie didn't say anything and went home.
- >He laid on the bed and talking to himself about his day.
- >The cat laid on his chest and listen to his complaining.
- >Jackie mom was home and asks what he wants to eat for tonight.
- >Jackie didn't respond to her and started making weird noises.
- >Jackie mom went in his room and asks him about his day.
- >He told her about hiya and the cats.
- >Jackie mom was interested in this hiya girl.
- >It was the first time that Jackie ever talks to another kid that isn't his sister.
- >Jackie mom thought he was getting too lonely.
- >He didn't need friends, He got a-lot work to do and family to protect.
- >Jackie-mom giggle at him and walk out of the room. She tells Jackie that they are having pizza for tonight.
- >Jackie didn't want pizza, He just wanted to go to sleep.
- >So, he slept on the bed, while the cat looks at Jackie for the whole night.
- >When he woke up. He heard a scream coming from the kitchen.
- >Jackie mother was bleeding from hand.
- >She tells him she got a medkit to heal her hands or to stop the bleeding.
- >Jackie search for it around the house and found in the bathroom.
- >The cat sitting over the kit and staring Jackie with her emerald eyes
- >He tries to grab but the cat tries to scratch.
- >So, Jackie got to turn on the sink and splash water on the cat to make the cat go away.
- >It works and he grabs the med kit to help his mother.
- >When he got back to his mother, she stopped bleeding and started laughing.
- >Her voice started to change and pointed at Jackie.
- >A huge electricity beam shock Jackie and made him collapse on the floor.
- >A man come in his Jackie home and kiss Jackie mom for a job well done.
- >He was pale and wear old Englishman clothes, He calls himself "Phantom shock".
- >Phantom shock pity Jackie for crossing the beast king and being so stupid.
- >Walk closer to Jackie lifeless body and notice he is breathing.
- >Phantom shock try to correct his mistake by doing the final blow.
- >But, Jackie surprise him by grabbing him by the legs and making him lose balance.
- >He landed on a glass table and damage himself so bad.
- >He couldn't stand up, He grabs on Jackie mom and disappears with her.
- >Jackie still hurt by phantom shock attack and laid down on the floor. Thinking about how will he defeat that man.
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- >Jackie was dead on the floor and can't move his body.
- >He hears his sister crying and He was too paralyzed to help his sister
- >Someone was ringing the door. The doorbell causes the electricity to disappear.
- >Jackie was surprised that he wasn't paralyzed anymore.
- >He jumps up and answers the door
- >The person that was behind the door was hiya.
- >Jackie moans at her and allow her inside of his house
- >Hiya was here for books to take from Jackie mother.
- >Jackie grabs all the books and tells hiya to leave. But, she hears crying from her sister room.
- >Hiya went into her sister room and notice something strange.
- >There was green ooze all over the floor, And Jackie quickly grabs her sister.
- >Jackie try to explain himself, he spills out all of his secrets to hiya.
- >Hiya didn't believe it and giggle at him.
- >Until the green ooze started making noises.
- >A recording of phantom shock tells Jackie to be prepared. He asks Jackie to fight him in the park at midnight.
- >Hiya was shocked and amazed by this moment. She thought Jackie was a superhero.
- >When the recording stopped. Jackie sister was crying even louder.
- >Jackie didn't know how to calm down babies. But, hiya did.
- >She sings a beautiful song to calm down the baby.
- >It works and the baby started giggling like hiya
- >Jackie try to figure out how he going to beat phantom shock and save his mother.
- >Jackie hears the hiya song. He found out why he wasn't paralyzed.
- >It was noised! His electricity respond to noises! It is like that Raijin book that his father gave to him.
- "Whatever there is sound, There is always lightning to rebound".
- >Jackie got his old drums and try practicing his drumming.
- >He begs hiya to protect his sister.
- >Hiya asks Jackie why he hasn't called the cops on the phantom shock.
- >He answers by saying that the phantom shock probably kills his mother.
- >Jackie and Hiya grabs all of the rubber that they could find around the house and created armor for Jackie.
- >Jackie fighting gear was rubber suit is made by 3000 rubbers, a trash bag. and condoms for his feet.
- >Hiya laughs at his armor and tells him to go kick phantom shock butt.
- >So, Jackie ran to the park and ready to fight phantom shock.
- >But, nobody was there in the park.
- >Jackie felt embarrassed
- >He sits down and waits for the phantom shock.
- >Waited for 4 hours. He still didn't come to fight him.
- >He started crying and felt lied to.
- >He should have protected his mother, He shouldn't have allowed this to happen.
- >The park owner was about to close the park
- >He notices Jackie was crying.
- >Parks owner asks him why he was crying and Jackie answer that he lost his mother.
- >The owner look at Jackie and try to hug him.
- >Jackie was uncomfortable about this and tells him to not do it.
- >The owner was being very aggressive.
- >He forces Jackie to kick him below the belt and run away from him.
- >The park owner started drooling blue stuff and started crawling towards.
- >Jack pulls out his drums and did a single drum solo
- >The owner stopped in his tracks and then pass out, big burst of electricity came out of his lifeless body.
- >Everything went silences for a moment.
- >Jackie prepares himself for the next attack.
- >He turns up his reactor 2000 and started drumming.
- >Jackie heard laughter from an abandon music hall.
- >The music hall used to be a popular place until the owner was murdered and become haunted.
- >Jackie run into the creepy place to look for the phantom shock.
- >The laughter turn into a beautiful creepy song.
- >Phantom shock tells Jackie that he knew that a stupid kid will found out his weakness.
- >But, It didn't matter because nobody can keep up his rhythm.
- >He was a general that sings a beautiful song to his enemies before they will die.
- >Jack was afraid, He didn't have the heart to beat phantom shock
- >But, he remembers that his mom is still in danger.
- >Fire came out of Jackie's eyes and he started drumming
- >He needs to think about that grandma song.
- >The song was sung by some goddess by some lake.
- >Jackie knew it wasn't the best song, but it is something.
- >Jackie started moving towards The Phantom."
- >And Phantom shock started laughing him.
- >He tells Jackie that the song can't help him.
- >But, Jackie didn't care, He doesn't get any ideas in his pocket.
- >Phantom shock got out of his hiding spot and started doing his swag walk.
- >Phantom shock blasts the drums out of Jackie and ready to do the final blow.
- >Jackie was blown away from the blast and landed on an old 90's guitar.
- >Phantom shock laughs at him and tells him to stand up.
- >Jackie didn't know what to do, He grabs on the guitar.
- >And started praying to whatever god.
- >He charges at the phantom and try to hit with the electricity guitar
- >Phantom shock quickly block his attack and laugh at it.
- >He told Jackie that his mom will be his slave for now on.
- >Jackie eyes turned red and he kicks Phantom shock below the belt.
- >With the full force of his might, He hits the guitar on Phantom shock head.
- >Then again in his shoulders.
- >Phantom shock was hurt, but he isn't down.
- >He tries to blast Jackie with his electricity powers.
- >but Jackie block it with his guitar.
- >The guitar absorb the electricity powers and started glowing.
- >Jackie was confused by the moment. He sees phantom shock freaking out and trying to run away from Jackie.
- >Jackie connect the dots and did the biggest guitar solo.
- >The guitar solo cause giant electricity explosion. Causing the phantom shock to be destroyed in the blast and turning the whole town dark.
- >Jackie was cover in ash.
- >He calls out for the phantom shock. But, he didn't answer back.
- >Jackie started freaking out that he kill a person.
- >But, Jackie notices a small crystal glowing in the dark.
- >He holds the crystal and notices a small phantom shock is trying to get out.
- >Phantom shock curse him and his family.
- >Jackie tells him where is his mom.
- >Phantom shock pointed at a room.
- >He opens the door and saw his mom in chains.
- >Jackie started shaking the phantom shock crystal
- >Jackie asks phantom shock, where is the location of the key.
- >Phantom shock didn't want to talk
- >Jackie threaten him that he going to smash his crystals to pieces. If he doesn't answer him.
- >Jackie hears the police and thinks he is going to jail for what he did.
- >He searches around the place and found nothing, the key was too small to see.
- >So, Jackie pull on his mother chains with all of his might! It didn't work.
- >The police walk in the music hall and found Jackie with his mom.
- >The captain of the police group asks Jackie about what happens in here.
- >Jackie told a lie.
- >He told the police officers that a gang beat up his mom and left her for dead.
- >Police officers thought it was strange for random criminals to do that, but they didn't care to asks more questions.
- >One of the officers found the missing key and free Jackie mother from the chains
- >The ambulances. came and help her to the hospital.
- >Jackie sat next to and started thinking what he just did tonight.
- >He felt guilty about not telling officers, he didn't want anybody to get hurt because of him.
- >But when he looks at his mother, he didn't know what to do.
- >When he reaches the hospital, he was going to give the crystal to polices.
- >But, He hesitated on telling the truth when he saw blood on the windows.
- >Jackie think that he could wait another day to tell the truth.
- >He spends a night in the hospital, waiting for his mother to wake up.
- >When it was morning, he heard his phone ringing.
- >Jackie answers the phone and hears a high pitch Japanese girl screaming at him.
- >It wasn't hiya.
- >It was just some other girl
- >He hears hiya laughing in the background, she sounds like she is having fun.
- >Hiya got on the phone and slowly explains what is going on.
- >Her sister is mad that a baby is in her room and she wanted to know why there is a baby in her room.
- >Jackie felt embarrassed that he forgot about his sister and promise that he will get his sister back.
- >Hiya wasn't bothered by it and she asks Jackie to come to her house quickly. Before she will run out of diapers.
- >Jackie turn off the phone and then pull out the crystal.
- >He asks phantom shock to help his mother, but Shockey didn't want to do it.
- >Phantom shock laughs at him and tells him that his mother will forever be in a coma.
- >But, Jackie ain't having that.
- >He shakes the crystal with full force and he threatens to break the crystal.
- >Phantom shock quickly asks him to stop. And he promises to cure his mother.
- >He shakes even harder and started screaming at him to fix his mother.
- >Phantom shock focus his power and broke the curse that he put on his Jackie mother.
- >She suddenly woke up from her coma and was really confused.
- >She asks why she is in the hospital?
- >But, Jackie made her forget that question by hugging her.
- >he thought that she lost her. He thought that she will be dead.
- >She got out of the bed and try to speak to the nearest doctor.
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