Dependence Blue json review

This is more of a consistency thing, but in the chapter pictures and some jsons they say "Hallo" (51129_title01, 51129_title11, & 512906-7_DTYxn), while in other jsons they say "Hello" (512901-0, 512901-2_xkLfz, & 512902-4_xkLfz). And in 512912-2_DTYxn both are used. Not really sure which one you guys wanted to go with.


512901-4_xkLfz
Himena: Those two better prepare themselves,@because I'm definitely gonna bring 'em under my wing!
--> move the line break to after "because"


512902-4_xkLfz
Himena: I couldn't narrow it down to justone.
--> add a space in between "justone"


512903-1_xkLfz
[Grams] Well then, I suppose you’ll just have to@buy something, won’t you?
--> remove [Grams] and the space after it


512903-5_xkLfz
(for the first three, the cg narration box can't fit four lines so...)
Shigure: —Shigure—@I had a classmate like you, Himena,@whom I saved from a Witch,@but it didn't change anything...
--> move the 2nd line break to after "saved" and remove the 3rd line break

Shigure: —Shigure—@I've always been in the corner of the class,@somewhere in the background,@being talked about behind my back.
--> move the 2nd line break to after the 2nd "in" and remove the 3rd line break

Himena: —Himena—@When I tried to support him,@everyone started looking at me coldly,@and I got scared...
--> move the 2nd line break to after "started" and remove the 3rd line break

Himena: —Himena—@I want to become an existence that even Magical Girls can't push around,@so that I can be free to love who I want...!
--> move the 2nd line break to after "can't"

San: There's a stench of filth and soap blended together...!
--> add a line break after "blended"


512904-2_xkLfz
San: It's taught me how to dance and play taiko drums... The time it's brought me has been simply divine.
--> add a line break after ...


512904-7_xkLfz
Shigure: Wow, you really do understand these kinds of things...
--> add a line break before "things"


512906-2_DTYxn
The athletic department is closed today, so we can use the gym all we want!
--> add a line break after "can"


512906-7_DTYxn
Jun: I was trying to change who I was...well, that should've been how it went...
--> add a line break after "that"


512907-1_DTYxn
Shigure: (We ended up lying to the instructor to get them to join, but...)
--> add a line break before "join"

San: It appears Her Highness was mistaken regarding the situation in Takarazaki.@The situation hasn't improved in the slightest.@In fact, it's only gotten worse.
--> add a line break after "regarding"

San: I apologize, but I've laid out our terms for our cooperation.@If this situation doesn't change,@Miyu and I will not join you.
--> add a line break after "our"

Himena: Hey gals, let's meet at the mountains in Hokuyo this evening!@I'll explain the reason behind Takarazaki's worsening situation@and tell you who the real culprit is.
--> move the line breaks to after "Hokuyo" and after "worsening"


512907-2_DTYxn
Himena: "That means that the station is like a crossroads for criminals,@and there are lots of people who can answer the second question,@'Why did you do it?'"
--> move the line breaks to before "criminals" and after "answer"


512907-3_DTYxn
Himena: Even if you didn't intend to, isn't it possible you used it unconsciously?
--> add a line break after "used"

Himena: That's why we thought the mess would@get worse
--> add a period at the end


512908-3_DTYxn
Mitsune: [textBlack:I'm on my way to the scene of the crime!]@[textBlack:Looks like it's a place I've kept my eye on.]@[textBlack:If any incident is prevented today, consider it thanks to me.]
--> add a line break after "consider"

Mitsune: [textBlack:There's someone in Takarazaki who protects this town.]
--> add a line break after "this"


512908-4_DTYxn
San: Miwa...Mitsune...
--> I know you guys wanted to keep San formal, but I think the name order here should be switched to firstname lastname like the rest of the story.


512910-1_DTYxn
Jun: But then I realized that Mitsune had learned about Magical Girls.@I was shocked when she started considering becoming one herself...
--> move the 1st line break to before "Magical" and add a 2nd line break after "started"


512910-2_DTYxn
Mitsune: I'm sure Jun was the one who took the reins and pulled me along...@And I was glad to be pulled along,@because I would've been helpless to do anything on my own...
--> add a line break after "reins"

Mitsune: I was more torn by Jun's absence than by my own seclusion.@It was unbearably painful not being able to see the person I aspired to be.
--> add a line break after "person"


512910-3_DTYxn
Mitsune: But soon,@I realized that what everyone was praising was just my false self.@I was still a helpless, pathetic person.
--> add a line break after "praising"


512910-4_DTYxn
Jun: Nah, it's my fault. I'm the one who failed to prevent it...
--> add a line break after "prevent"