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Dear Peter:
Hear you was interested to Chinese culture. So I come introduce something about Tomb sweeping Day. The follow is:

First and foremost, Tomb Sweeping Day was held on 4th April every years. The day was mean to farmer will have a good harvest. When Tomb Sweeping Day will comeing before, it will be rain. What's more, Tomb Sweeping Day was had 2000 years old, Human always went to mountains and visit they father and mother.

Last but not least, Tomb Sweeping Day is very important for Chinese. Fine, what do you think about Tomb Sweeping Day? I'm looking forward your early reply.


Dear Peter,
I have learned that you are so interested in Qing Ming Festival. Now let me introduce it to you.

Qing Ming Festival is one of the most important festivals in China. QingMing Festival falls on April 5th. On that day, people will go to sweep graves and visiting to ancestors.

Qing Ming Festival is traditional festival in China, it is a good festival from ancient times to the present day. My introduction is over, hope you will like it.

Yours,
LiHua