anonxMoxxiexMillie story

from /hhg/ Helluva Hotel general #667
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Hi everyone.
Sorry I missed 666, timezones sck. Anyway, here's my anonxMoxxiexMillie story:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/29958579?view_adult=true
What started out as a normalish 4k word story ended up jumping out to 18k. It was a lot of fun to write, though. Hope you like it, I put a fair bit of effort into it.
Cumbrains can skip to the end for smt, but I think you'll like it better if you read the build up.
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Thank you very much, anon!
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My pleasure, Anon!
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fcking B A S E D
I'll give it a read eventually
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I misread that as "Cmbrians" and was thoroughly confused as to what a county in England with some nice fluorite mines had to do with being hony
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>>37088711
Good lad.
>>37088783
Is it a good one?
>>37088866
Those bloody brits. Can't keep it in their pants.
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>Is it a good one?
Yes actually.
How does the attached image make you feel?
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/687554323999096885/820816867249750036/1615767302773.png
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I hate it. Well done.
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Why do you hate it?
I made it just for you.
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Congrats on the completion there boss.
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https://pastebin.com/S9H9GZv6
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>the writer are dropping their stories
>still working on mine because real life sht happened
fugg, I'll try and get it done tonight
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>>37091774
I'll read it today when I get back with food and such! Well done.
>>37091885
Thanks! Feels good to be free. Now what to work on next, I wonder...
>>37092366
Let us know when you do!
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Yeah I'm not done with my DC entry either but I might start posting what I have later on. Then its on to Fallen Exterminator nightmare chapter.
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>>37092366
Don't gotta rush, pal. Take your time, or you'll end up hating what you made.
>>37092430
>Well Done
You say that, but it reads like someone threw a bunch of 11th grade writing projects into a woodchipper and then made a story with the shreds.

But thank you. Yours was great, though I gotta ask about what made you go with a 'Satyr' build for the reader out of curiosity.
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>what made you go with a 'Satyr' build for the reader out of curiosity.
Because they're hot?
Well, actually it started as just a more generic satan-y demon for the reader to better self insert, but then I started giving him some more character and wanted him to stand out a touch more, hence the goat legs. The burnt hands and charred claws/horns have backstory significance that never really came up.
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>Because they're hot
You know what, fair enough.