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  1. Page 4
  2. Hello, Kiira~★ here!
  3. Thanks for picking up this book!
  4.  
  5. This is my first ecchi book, so I’ll be really happy if you like it.
  6.  
  7. My first original work… I’m so excited.
  8. Everyone who follows me on Twitter probably knows this already, but the first adult book I ever wrote was on Touhou’s Komeiji Satori, and I’ve also drawn other characters, but for a long time I mainly drew Satorin. Even from here on out, I’m planning on making Satorin books for the usual event, but there are a lot of things I can’t draw since I’m limited to Satorin’s personality, so I had always said that I wanted to try something different once in a while. I’ve thought of 2 other future releases, but I can’t really find the motivation to draw them unless I really like them, so I thought it was a perfect time to make an attempt at an original work where I can do anything I want. That’s how this book came to be. It won’t be just limited to Satorin, but she’ll definitely be in the next two works that I’ll be writing, so they won’t really be original works.
  9.  
  10. That’s how Miu was born.
  11.  
  12. She’s a completely innocent, yet clever girl, who is completely opposite from Satorin. I thought of many different ideas while I was daydreaming and, before I realized it, I had already thought of a setting for her friends and family, so the world opened up before me. To tell the truth, I had originally planned to release another Satorin book for Yukicon, while adding the original work as a small bonus / test run, but once I started writing, I found myself wanting to work on the original book more, so I stopped caring about the number of pages I was writing and decided to write the thing I actually wanted to write as much as I possibly could. So, basically since this story was meant to be a test run, it’s only really half complete, but I managed to extend the number of pages to the usual amount. Also, there was supposed to be a scene where the protagonist meets Miu, which I was going to make the first book on that story include, but, as I went with the flow, this happened to come first. Depending on how well this book is received, I think the sequel will be about their encounter.
  13.  
  14. Well then, I hope you enjoy this until the end!
  15.  
  16. 2017.11 Kiira~★
  17.  
  18. Page 5
  19. Sou-kun, wake up!
  20. It’s about to be past noon already, wake up!
  21. Hey! Wake up!!
  22. Today’s a break and you’re wasting it!
  23. Alright, fine, don’t sit on top of me, // you’re heavy!
  24. Kyan
  25. For your information, I was working until morning.
  26. … it’s white
  27. My name’s Souta. I’m working as something of a novice manga artist.
  28. Fufu~
  29. This is Miu. She lives in the same apartment as me, and, for some reason, she seems to be very attached to me. Maybe it’s because manga artists are a rare sight?
  30. Hey, hey! // Let me help you with something ♥
  31.  
  32. Page 6
  33. That’s right! // The weather’s nice today, so I’ll dry out your futon! // Alright, move…
  34. What’s up with you today? You usually never help out.
  35. My mom said that if I was gonna stay for a while, then I should help out.
  36. Oh, is that so? That’s worthy of praise.
  37. Though, if we’re talking about compensation, then I’ve been giving you plenty of that ♥
  38. Hey, don’t talk about that in other places… (tear symbol thingy)
  39. Don’t drop it.
  40. Ah // Hey, Chomi!
  41.  
  42. Page 7
  43. Ah, Miu-chan, hi!
  44. Are you heading out?
  45. Yea, to Ikebukuro. Going shopping. // Do you wanna go too, Miu-chan?
  46. Mm… // I think I’ll pass today.
  47. Oh, really?
  48. Ah // I forgot to say-
  49. … She’s defenseless. How shameful.
  50. Hyan!!
  51. Wai-
  52. Wai-
  53. Miu-chan?
  54. Wait a second, Sou-kun, what are you doing?
  55. Hm? I dropped your panties. // Don’t worry about it.
  56. That doesn’t make any sense!
  57. Hey, your friend’s calling you.
  58.  
  59. Page 8
  60. ?
  61. Sorry! // It’s noth- // Hya!!
  62. Sou-kun! I’m actually gonna get mad!
  63. Oh, is that so?
  64. This place has gotten nice and prickly, though.
  65. Ah // wai- // No,
  66. I’m.. // I’m…
  67.  
  68. Page 9
  69. Nn… // … Nn …
  70. Ah
  71. Ah… Jeez…
  72. No…
  73. Miu-chan?
  74. Ah // No.
  75. Ah
  76. I-Idiot!
  77. Ah
  78. No
  79. Jeez, // Chomi-chan is looking…
  80. Sto-...
  81. Ah ♥
  82. Ahn ♥
  83.  
  84. Page 10
  85. Aren’t you feeling it more than usual, though? // You’re about to cum, right?
  86. Th- // That’s not true~ (angry sign)
  87. Hey!
  88. Ah // Hello!
  89. Aaalright
  90. Shall I show you cumming to your friend?
  91. What!? (angry sign)
  92. Wha-
  93. Ahh
  94. You // idiot.
  95. Ah
  96. No~
  97. Ah ♥
  98.  
  99. Page 11
  100. Ah ♥ // Ah ♥
  101. Ah…
  102. If you do it that much…! // She’s gonna hear the sound~!
  103. No // Nn… // Ah
  104. Nn
  105. Nnku // Nn
  106. Nn~
  107. ? // ?
  108. I wonder what they’re doing? // Miu-chan’s voice sounds kinda lewd…
  109. Noo,
  110. Sou-kun
  111. Ah
  112. I’m really // gonna cum. // Even though Chomi’s watching,
  113. I’m
  114. Cumminggg // Aah
  115.  
  116. Page 12
  117. Ahhh // Ahh, No, Ahhh~ ♥ ♥ ♥
  118.  
  119. Page 13
  120. I can’t… // anymore…
  121. Sorry about that,
  122. Miu doesn’t seem to be feeling well.
  123. Ah // Okay!
  124. I wonder what that was about…?
  125. Jeez… I can’t believe you. // Who does that in front of a friend?
  126. Ahaha
  127. Pervert! // Lolicon!
  128. You were feeling even better because you were being seen by someone else, though~
  129. Well…
  130. Yea.
  131. It was good, but…
  132. Hey… can we do it?
  133. What?
  134.  
  135. Page 14
  136. Huh, this early…?
  137. Don’t wanna?
  138. … // It’s not that I don’t want to…
  139. Hell yea! // That’s my Miu-chan.
  140. Huh?
  141. No way, right here!?
  142. Are you stupid? // We’re gonna be seen!
  143. It’s fine. // They won’t be able to see where we’re connected, and as long as you don’t cause a racket, no one will be able to tell.
  144. Alright! // Raise your tooshie!
  145. … No
  146. This is bad, // after all… // My voice is gonna come out.
  147. Just a bit is fine.
  148.  
  149. Page 15
  150. W-We’re really doing it!?
  151. Let’s do it in the room…
  152. Nope, // I can’t hold it in anymore.
  153. Wait, you’re putting it in already~~
  154. If you don’t relax, it’s gonna hurt!
  155. Uu…
  156. Nn…
  157. Nn
  158. Squish
  159. Squish
  160. Nn… Ku…
  161.  
  162. Page 16
  163. Nn…!!
  164. Fuuu
  165. Ah // Ahh!!
  166. Ahh~ // Uu…
  167. J-Jeez~
  168. Alright, // it’s in.
  169. There’s a futon behind you, too. It’s no different than normal.
  170. It is different… Jeez
  171. Well, // I’m gonna start moving now.
  172.  
  173. Page 17
  174. Ahn ♥
  175. Fuu
  176. I can’t,
  177. I actually // ca-
  178. Hya!!!
  179. It’s so strongggg!
  180. Ah, No, //Sou-ku-... // Onii-chan,
  181. No.
  182. Nn
  183. No ♥
  184. Stop!!
  185. Onii-chan, // Noo.
  186.  
  187. Page 18
  188. Alright, alright.
  189. Uu
  190. *Sniff*
  191. Why does she only call me onii-chan at times like this? It’s so cute.
  192. I’ll move slowly, okay? // Let’s do it slowly, okay?
  193. … Okay
  194. Nn
  195. Nn…
  196. Nn
  197.  
  198. Page 19
  199. Fuu… // It feels so nice having sex with such a cute girl from under the morning sunlight.
  200. Nn
  201. Nn…
  202. Nn
  203. S-Sou-kun…
  204. !
  205. Sou-kun!!
  206. Hm?
  207. Nnah
  208. You’re about to cum?
  209. Yea.
  210. Nn
  211. Ah
  212. Nn!
  213. Can I move a bit faster?
  214. Yes.
  215. Hya
  216.  
  217. Page 20
  218. No. Ah
  219. Nn
  220. Ah
  221. No.
  222. Ah
  223. Ah ♥
  224. Ahn ♥
  225. No.
  226. Noo. // Are you done yet!!?
  227. Just… a bit more…!
  228. Nn
  229. ~!!!
  230. Ahh
  231. Nooo.
  232.  
  233. Page 21
  234. Nn~~~!
  235. Spurt~ / Squirt~
  236. Alt: Pew pew~
  237. Spurt~ / Squirt~
  238. Alt: Pew Pew~
  239. Spurt~ / Squirt~
  240. Alt: Pew Pew~
  241.  
  242. Page 22
  243. Nn ~ Nn ♥♥
  244. Spurt~ / Squirt~
  245. Spurt~ / Squirt~
  246. Spurt~ / Squirt~
  247. It’s still // coming out…
  248. Spurt~ / Squirt~
  249. Spurt~ / Squirt~
  250. Spurt~ / Squirt~
  251. Nn…
  252. Ah ♥
  253.  
  254. Page 23
  255. Good job bearing with it.
  256. Good girl, good girl. (text to the right of Sou-kun)
  257. I’m never gonna do it in a place like this again, got it? (angry sign)
  258. Oh? // Yusa-san! Is our daughter still over there?
  259. Hello!
  260. She came over to play!
  261. Wah // Wai- // Ah, Mom and sis!
  262. Sorry that she always causes so much trouble.
  263. No, no! She always helps me out around the house, so she saves me a lot of trouble.
  264. I’m not being a nuisance! // Hmph! (she’s actually making a noise while sticking her tongue out but there’s no direct translation for that)
  265. Have you done your homework?
  266. I already promised Chomi I’d do it with her tomorrow!
  267. Well… that’s fine, but don’t bother him too much.
  268. It’s fine, you’re so stubborn!
  269.  
  270. Page 24
  271. Jeez! // Mom, you’re such a- // Eek!?
  272. ~!!!!?
  273. So-...
  274. Sou-kun? // No.
  275. You’re saying that, but all you’re doing is playing.
  276. Ah!
  277. !
  278. ~!!!
  279. Hm?
  280. Are you listening to me?
  281.  
  282. Page 25
  283. I… get it.. So… // Ah
  284. Just… // g-
  285. g-
  286. Nn!
  287. Well, alright then. We’re gonna go out shopping, so take care of the house while we’re gone.
  288. Ah
  289. Nn… // Okay.
  290. Let’s go, Yuu.
  291. Oka~yy
  292. They’re doing it.
  293. Unfortunate, I wanted to let them see you cum.
  294. Shut up! // Idiot! // Pervert!
  295. My bad, my bad. I couldn’t help it when there was such a cute ass right in front of me.
  296. It’s fine, so take it out…
  297.  
  298. Page 26
  299. Huh? // If we’ve gone this far already, we’ve gotta finish, right?
  300. You just did it a few minutes ago!
  301. Not here- // Nooo, go inside!!
  302. Ah
  303. Yea, I’m gonna cum inside. (last bubble with the normal-ish font)
  304. That’s not what I- // Noo.
  305. Noo,
  306. Ah
  307. I’m-
  308. I’m gonna…!
  309.  
  310. Page 27
  311. Ah
  312. Bump // Bump
  313. Ahn
  314. Ah
  315. Noo.
  316. Ah, ah, ah // It’s too fastttt.
  317.  
  318. Page 28
  319. Spurt~ / Squirt~
  320. Spurt~ / Squirt~
  321. Spurt~ / Squirt~
  322.  
  323. Page 29
  324. Nn!!
  325. Nn!! // Nn~!!!
  326.  
  327. Page 30
  328. Ahn ♥
  329. Ah…
  330. Fuah…
  331.  
  332. Page 31
  333. Haa…
  334. Haa…
  335. Nn!
  336. Nn… ♥ // Nn ♥ ♥
  337. Jeez… you came so much…
  338. You were too good, Miu. // Alright, you wanna get in the bath together now?
  339. … Yes
  340.  
  341. Page 32
  342. Character Introduction
  343. Tachibana Miu (Tachibana Miu)
  344. Height: 130 cm. 4th grade. Slightly smaller than average. An innocent, pure, and clever girl. She was curious about the self-proclaimed manga artist who moved into the same apartment as her, so she’s been hanging out in his house. Likes to draw.
  345. Yusa Souta (Souta Yusa)
  346. Height: 172 cm. A novice manga artist or something like that. He becomes attached to Miu after meeting her when he made his rounds after moving into his new apartment.
  347. Tachibana Yuu (Yuu Tachibana)
  348. Height: 145 cm. Second year of middle school. Miu’s older sister. The Tachibana family is all on the smaller side. She’s always spaced out. However, she’s also very observational. She’s also worried about her lack of emotion. Her relative, who works as an editor, relies on her sometimes as a model, but Yuu herself isn’t too interested in it.
  349. Chomi (Actual Name: Chiyomi)
  350. Heigh: 128 cm. 4th grade. Miu’s childhood friend since preschool. She seems to have an older brother in high school. Calm, but also likes doing things at her own pace.
  351. Page 33
  352. Thanks for reading all the way until the end~!
  353. Please leave a review using the QR Code at the end of the book!
  354.  
  355. I managed to finish drawing this! Ecchi books aren’t really my forte, so I’m always struggling through trial and error, but this had a different feeling to it than usual, so I had fun while writing it.
  356. I made Miu’s character without too much of a struggle, and she was easy to draw. The only thing I was slightly concerned about was the height. I like drawing girls that are about middle school age, but it seemed that everyone who liked reading my books preferred elementary school girls. With Satorin, her height was pretty unstable, but I kept in mind that the main character in this original work was an elementary schooler. Since 130 cm seemed to be the trend for elementary school girls, I decided on that height. However, once I started drawing, I realized that there was too much of a difference between 130 cm and 172 cm~~~! After noticing that, I worked really hard to smooth out the unevenness between those heights. Though, I do like couples with a decent height difference!
  357. This time, I tried to add some realism to the location. I usually don’t pay that much attention to the background, but I tried harder to make it more realistic this time. Although, if I pay too much attention to it, then it just takes too long to draw and ends up burying the character inside of it, so, in the latter half of the book, it might not be as detailed. As I wrote in the intro, this really was supposed to be a half-written story, but I lengthened it out. Someone had said to me somewhere before: “I want ecchi books to have at least 2 orgasm scenes.” I was already conscious of this ever since I started drawing Satorin, but I try my best to add at least two orgasm scenes if possible. However, whenever that happens it does get a bit more difficult for me. I’m still wondering how I’m going to address that issue from here on out. I would like to build up the story to a single, large climax, but if that happens twice then it’ll be more difficult to achieve that. If the story flows naturally like that, it’s okay, but if it’s forced then I feel like it might feel very insufficient. It’ll be on my to-do list for the next time.
  358. If the reviews for this book turn out well, then I’m planning on continuing the making of the Miu-chan series. However, there are other girls in the story other than just Miu, so, even though the series will be focused on Miu, there will be others involved as well! Since it’s an original work, I’d like to do whatever I feel like doing with the story. It’s safe to say that the next story is confirmed to be about when the two meet, but, after that, I want to draw out a story involving the older sister as well. Her personality is completely different from Miu’s, and she’s a slightly odd child, but I like her nonetheless.
  359. Ah, I forgot to write something very important. I wanted to draw a story of mutual love, which I couldn’t do well with Satorin. It would be easier if a male character like that existed in the original work, but there wasn’t really a male character like that, and it’s very difficult to make up a character like that. That’s why I decided to make my own original work. Yeah.
  360.  
  361. I’ll wrap this up here, but, please, leave a response~! It’s especially important for me to know your responses to this work since it’s my first original work. Be it the QR code at the end, Twitter, Pixiv, email, or whatever else you’d like to use, please let me know your what you think. I’ll use it as encouragement for next time!
  362.  
  363. Best regards from here on out~!
  364.  
  365. 2017.11 Kiira~★
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