xDraghun

pwnage217 Plot Review

Jul 18th, 2015
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  1. Hello pwnage217!
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  3. My name is xDraghuna and I will be reviewing your plot today. Lets start off with your structure.
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  5. As of now, your structure is lacking depth and detail. For example, you walls are basically flat with nothing on them. To add depth, push your walls in and layer different blocks, and to add detail, you have to add blocks such as stairs/slabs that will make it more appealing and colorful. If you still need reference, go to./warp depthtutorial Same for your lighthouse. It doesnt really look like a lighthouse but more of a candy cane. the sea lantern top doesnt compliment it. Try to use stone related blocks instead of wood related blocks.
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  7. Your tree doesnt really look appealing on your plot and it needs some loving. Try to work on the branches/roots, and add a lot more leaves especially with the size of tree you have. I recommend more small trees instead of one big tree.
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  9. You terrain is really flat and dull and you have two different hills that need some smoothing. The red sand patch doesnt really go with the rest of the plot and I recommend that the bottom of your pond should be sand/sandstone. You should also get rid of your road to add some extra space to your plot and add more hills in place of that.
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  11. Overall, I think your plot doesnt rly make any sense and that you should have a certain theme or style that you can follow by. For example, light houses are usually for beach coasts, and big trees dont belong at the beach. Try to work on the suggestions I have given you and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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