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  1. Zephyr #1: In Like a Lion.
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  3. PAGE UNO
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  5. We open on up on a single page view of Seattle's skyline, with the usual recognizable landmarks (the Space Needle, etc.).
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  7. First panel: In the top left corner stretching halfway across the page; an uptilt view of rotating helicopter blades *insert WHAP WHAP WHAP SFX here*. In the top left corner of the panel is a narration box.
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  9. Narration box: March 18. 2:50 PM.
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  11. Second panel: On the bottom right corner of the page. It depicts the back of a newswoman leaning out from the copter, mic in hand. She's wearing a pantsuit. The side of the copter has a large number 4 inside of a circle (which should look a bit familiar to any fellow comic fans out there...)
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  13. PAGE TWO
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  15. Has three medium-sized panels spread across the top, two larger ones at the center, and two medium-sized ones at the bottom.
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  17. First panel: A view of the newswoman's face. She's made up to be pretty, but not overly so, her blond hair curled immaculately, as are the manicured nails holding her microphone. She has wide, large-ish eyes, and overall a pretty face. She has stud earrings and a thing chain necklace.
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  19. Newswoman (Hannah Donahoe): *Speech bubble is jagged, showing the excitement and also the fact that it's electronically broadcast* "This is Hannah Donahoe, reporting just above the scene of this tragic situation."
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  21. Second panel: A birds-eye view of a bank, nestled between crowded buildings. The bank is large and Greek/Roman styled, with pillars decorating the front and a slanted roof on top, and a large cicle ingrained on the outcrop above the pillars, the words "SEATTLE ENTERPRISE" ingrained across the circle. Surrounding the entrance of the bank is the usual setup: cop cars and SWAT vans are arranged in a semicircle, with police and SWAT members taking cover behind the cars. Not many deatils are here, since it's high above, but enough to make out plenty of activity.
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  23. Hannah Donahoe speech bubble: "An organized group of criminals have taken no less than twenty civilians hostage inside the Seattle Enterprise bank!"
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  25. Third panel: A closer view of the bank, this time from directly behind the police line, allowing for a more detailed view of the various law enforcement personnel taking cover behind vehicles, drawing and checking weapons, etc. One particular policeman is behind the cruiser in front, a megaphone held up to his mouth. He's not wearing a cap, so you can see that his hair is black and slicked back, graying down at the sides, and he has a bit of a receeding hairline, showing that he's not very old, but aging. His face is angular, with a wide jaw, and rugged, stubble evident on his face.
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  27. Donahoe speech bubble: "Our criminology experts have expressed concerns that these criminals are far more organized than the average bank robbers, but police have neither confirmed nor denied these claims. SPD have also refused to comment on whether or not this highly organized holdup confirms the rumors of the existence of an unknown criminal org-"
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  29. Fourth panel: Takes up half of the center of the page, is box like until the right side, where a quarter is cut off with a slashing effect leading into the next panel, which is connected the same way. Donahoe is talking, but the hand of the cameraman can be seen pointing behind her, towards a silhoutted person flying right towards them.
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  31. Donahoe: *she notices the hand* "What?!"
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  33. Fifth panel: Depicts the hand of the newswoman on the right, with the mic flying out of her hands (be sure to depict spiraling lines around it, the shape of a tornado, to show that it is specifically wind carrying it), with a hand on the left (the edge of a jacket cuff can be seen, and that the hand is wearing leather gloves with studs on the knuckles) reaching out for it.
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  35. Sixth panel: An extreme close up on a grinning face, but out enough to see several fingers pulling down a cloth that formerly covered a grin.
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  37. Seventh panel: Longer than the sixth, and takes up the resto of the page. It has a close up on a pair of feet, clad in sneakers, and goes about halfway up to the calves, showing the this MYSTERY DUDE wears black jeans. They're standing on what is essentially super-compressed air, wich looks like a flat, whirling whiteness that thins out into a trail. It's sort of like Goku's Flying Nimbus, if it were flattened.
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  39. PAGE TROIS
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  41. First panel: This is another splash panel (don't worry, these won't be nearly as frequent, but entrances have to be GRAND). The splash panel nearly takes up the whol page, except for two panels floating near the bottom, tilted at opposite angles. This one depicts a boy with wild blond hair, a bug-eye goggle/ridiculously long scarf combo that's totally not from Kamen Rider, an aviator's jacket, under which is a black shirt with a large green stylized "Z" on the center, the ends of which spiral stylistically. The aforementioned sneakers, jeans are present, and leather gloves are present. He's turned towards the reader (think of it as the POV being looking out the copter like Hannah and the cameraman), but his bottom half is turned forwards, as if he's surfing on the air. He's holding the mic up to his mouth, and pointing at the camera. The speech bubble is located at the bottom of the page. It has the same jagged edges as Donahoe's.
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  43. MYSTERY DUDE: HELLOOOO, SEATTLE!!
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  45. Panel two: Depicts Hannah's shocked face.
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  47. Panel three: The same with the cameraman. He's wearing a baseball cap that simply says "MAC" as a logo, and has a round face with some stubble.
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  49. PAGE MORE (WHICH RHYMES WITH FOUR)
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  51. This page is made up of three rows, with the first panel being a taller one that takes up the first space of the top two rows.
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  53. First panel: A tilted front view of MYSTERY DUDE flying in by the side of the copter, grinning at the newspeoples. His scarf is pulled down for now, but his big derpy goggles cover most of his upper face. His scarf flaps behind him, and he still holds the mic up to his face.
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  55. Second panel: Another closeup on his face, but this time with enough room for a speech bubble.
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  57. MYSTERY DUDE: Now, I bet your wonderin' who I am, right? Well, don't you worry, 'cuz I'll tell ya!
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  59. Third panel: Close up on epic scarf flapping.
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  61. MYSTERY DUDE: I'm the master of wind itself! Introducing, you're new friendly neighborhood superhero...
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  63. Fourth panel: A longer one that takes up the same amount of space as the top row, but is all one panel, showing the word "ZEPHYR!", in the same stylized lettering as on his shirt. The word is curved, making it exit the bounds of the panel a lil' bit.
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