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- Hello leronzadok!!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. I'm going to make this a little short because your plots doesnt really need that much reviewing, which is a good thing. :D Let's start off with your structure.
- Your structures is pretty big and really nice. It demonstrates detail and depth really well and has a good block palette. My only recommendation is that it has a little too much button spam as detail. Your bridge needs some work especially with being compared to your well detailed house. I doubt it, but if you need extra reference on depth, try ./warp depthtutorial.
- I like your custom tree but it could use some more branches, and I think the roots are too big compared to the trunk. Next time, try to make more than just on tree.
- Your terrain is pretty decent. You have some good variation going on and the hills are nicely smoothed, but your little cave at the end of the pond doesn't look natural. I also suggest you make the bottom of your pond sand/sandstone instead of stone.
- Overall, I think you have put a lot of effort into your plot and you deserve a rank. Congratulations and to start your next plot, do ./warp novice ./plot auto :DDD
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