Tayter_Kat

TTT_Pachismo

Aug 6th, 2015
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  1. Hello TTT_Pachismo, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your Aspirant Plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to gazebos. You have an ample amount of larger structures, so great job on this! Sadly, you are missing the opportunity to add depth to your structures. Especially the castle and the gazebo. For the gazebo, the columns are stiff and don't look proportional to the top, which looks more heavy and agile. I recommend taking a few of the columns out and adding more detail instead of a pillar up. You can add slabs, stairs, fences, trap doors, and buttons to add more detail and may fit theme I believe you are going for. The last thing here is that you have a palette, but it varies within the structures on your plot. For example, you gazebo is made out of jungle wood, stone bricks, and cobblestone, but your castle consists of dark oak, green glass, both mossy cobble and plain cobble, end finally stone bricks. Try building everything with the same blocks to keep the theme continues and this will tell a story and make the plot look more appealing. Keep the pallet continuous from the castle, to the houses, to the gazebo.
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like animals and trees/. Your organics look good and they meet the requirements needed to rank. I would not change anything about them because they look decent. Great Job! The bumble bees are also a great touch:D
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. Your terrain looks fine for an Aspirant Plot, so another great job here. Just make sure, for future reference, that there are not a lot of flat spots and that the terrain flows well. The pathway should also make sense instead of climbing halfway up a hill.
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  10. Fix the things listed above and you are good to go! Good Luck<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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