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- Hello GUMMYDAGREAT!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot again. You plot shows a lot more effort put into it. Lets get started!
- Your structure looks super abstract but it looks good. Its just that it looks a little too messy. Try to clean it up a bit. Make the detailing and depth more noticeable. ./warp depthtutorial for more help
- You have a bunch of trees almost like a forest, and thats good. The Dark Oak tree doesnt match the other trees. I suggest you make the trees acacia wood based on the structure. Stick with one tree design and work with it.
- Your terrain is pretty nice and goes well with the style of the build. I like the block palette and the variation/colors. Good Job.
- I think you just need to fix up your structure and trees and you're all good for a rankup. Good Job and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission! :D
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