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13:40:41@Roget
Scantron: I've been working on my oft-procrastinated res tale and I wrote some bits with Vang in them, can I ask if you'd take a look at them?
13:40:56Scantron
yeah for sure
13:41:14DarkStuff
Roget: Vang huh what?
13:41:22
Who's Vang?
13:42:11
I have a character I love named Davey Vang that I thought I could incorporate into the SCP-verse at some point in one of my articles, is Vang (the name) already taken?
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13:42:50Scantron
DarkStuff: my author avatar (read: nothing like me, but it's the name on my author page) is Dr. Jason Vang, memeticist
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... admittedly that page is almost exclusively just a modified copypasta now
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13:43:28Scantron
but if he ends up being important in a tale i'm up for editing stuff back in
13:43:44@Roget
http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/roget-alt-box
13:44:18DarkStuff
Scantron: ...I guess it could be a coincidence, or they could be related, depending on how I want to write him in, but I fuggin love the name Davey Vang and I'm not sure I'm willing to give it up
13:44:22Scantron
it IS a good name
13:44:33
could be a coincidence, could even be related for all i care
13:44:51DarkStuff
Scantron: Thank you :)
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13:45:49Quarks-3
Uhhhhh
13:46:10ophite
Hm.
13:46:41Quarks-3
Why did I drink coffee...
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13:47:33ophite
http://sandbox.scp-wiki.net/ophite
13:47:43
I think that first interview reads much better than it did yesterday.
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.lc
13:49:03Scantron
Roget: i should write a tale about Junior Researcher Schmukatelli
13:49:04%jarvis
absentmindednihilist: SCP-2419 (written 2 hours ago by BO2guy2013) - http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-2419
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absentmindednihilist: SCP-2487: Postman Chasers (written a day ago by Ihp) - http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-2487
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absentmindednihilist: SCP-2946: Overly Large E. Coli (written 2 days ago by DrBleep) - http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-2946
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13:49:46@Roget
heh
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13:50:04Scantron
> Dr. Harry Loser
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i think that's what the popular kids called me in fourth grade
13:50:19SpookyBee
gasp a Niles
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* SpookyBee waggles at
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13:50:59@Roget
.au loser
13:51:02%jarvis
roget: Dr LosER ( http://www.scp-wiki.net/dr-los-e-r-s-personnel-file ) has 6 pages (6 Originals) (3 SCP Articles, 3 Tales). They have 656 net upvotes with an average of 109. Their latest page is Teeth, Dearie at +122.
13:51:17@Roget
based on a real aa author page char too
13:51:54SpookyBee
let's make Skeltal a canon d00d
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13:53:16@salvagebar
Well well well
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look who's back
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Roget
13:53:25SpookyBee
u fukn wot m8
13:53:29@salvagebar
You MONSTER
13:53:52
How are all the bitches, Roget?
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13:54:07@salvagebar
hello also to SpookyBee
13:54:07Scantron
oh wow, i completely forgot that that user existed
13:54:13@Roget
still cute, they were outside earlier but now they're inside
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I'm outside writing
13:54:21@salvagebar
Spookiest of Bees
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Awwwww outside
13:54:31SpookyBee
I am a spoopy Bee
13:54:37@salvagebar
I remember outside, before our 40 days of rain began
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those Roget dogs - they are like small ponies but think they're puppies
13:55:08weryllium
what is... rain?
13:55:12the_xenomorph666
i
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hi
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.lc
13:55:15%jarvis
the_xenomorph666: SCP-2419 (written 2 hours ago by BO2guy2013) - http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-2419
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the_xenomorph666: SCP-2487: Postman Chasers (written a day ago by Ihp) - http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-2487
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the_xenomorph666: SCP-2946: Overly Large E. Coli (written 2 days ago by DrBleep) - http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-2946
13:57:10Scantron
> He stood atop it, overlooking the entirety of the front yard and cheered!"
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what's with the !" ?
13:58:08@salvagebar
Hmmm playing the Mad Max game
13:58:09Scantron
"She pitied him over her clipboard." this is a good sentence
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.l
13:58:33%jarvis
aideneldritch: SCP-2487: Postman Chasers (written a day ago by Ihp) - http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-2487
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aideneldritch: SCP-2946: Overly Large E. Coli (written 2 days ago by DrBleep) - http://www.scp-wiki.net/scp-2946
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aideneldritch: The Dedekind-Infinite Demographic (written 2 days ago by Aiden Eldritch) - http://www.scp-wiki.net/the-dedekind-infinite-demographic
13:59:36@salvagebar
I finally survived a storm
13:59:51SpookyBee
gasp an AidenELdritch
13:59:56the_xenomorph666
anyone wanna review my draft?
13:59:56%AidenELdritch
hiya
13:59:56SpookyBee
with an uppercase L
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> geen screen
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hue
14:00:56AidenEldritch
saturation
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temp
14:01:21@salvagebar
I hade to kill the members of this bizarre hoarding cult who attacked me and hid out in their cave, next to this 30-foot-tall totem they had constructed out of the bodies of their enemies
14:01:26Scantron
> Of the group which came over from Prometheus after working on whatever that memetic Prometheus project there had been Dr. Vang was really the only one left of any significance.
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14:01:37Scantron
roget i think there should be a comma after "been"
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or really
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this feels like you mangled a merging of two sentences
14:01:54@salvagebar
And MM storms are like, two or three minutes long and insanely dangerous
14:02:00Scantron
it's too long and i'm not sure i'm parsing it all right
14:02:00ophite
AidenEldritch: Hey. I reused Dr. Khayyam in a way which I think really improves the characterization. (Unstated background: an ongoing feud between Khayyam and Larter over Larter's attempt to close down the Ethics Committee investigation into Memetics.)
14:02:17AidenEldritch
ophite: Interesting avenue to take it
14:02:55OmegaWarhead
hey guys
14:02:57@salvagebar
So I  was just staring at this pile of dead dudes nailed to this wooden pole, listening to wind and lightning for a long while, waiting for the lethal lightning to stop
14:03:00ophite
AidenEldritch: Basically, Larter is both a heroic, brilliant public servant as a person and a tyrannical workaholic as a manager.
14:03:04@salvagebar
I think I like this game, a whole lot
14:03:26Scantron
roget are you naming your agents after hockety players
14:03:31SpookyBee
heya OmegaWarhead
14:03:42OmegaWarhead
finally got inside :D
14:03:45AidenEldritch
hockety sockety
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:P
14:03:48Sliptide213
Hi
14:03:50OmegaWarhead
that was pretty hard
14:04:05Sliptide213
That's what she said
14:04:11AidenEldritch
:I
14:04:27OmegaWarhead
although I had a guide
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nice :D
14:04:27the_xenomorph666
hey omega
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Same
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it took me months before I joned
14:04:49@salvagebar
 Of the group which came over from Prometheus after working on whatever that memetic Prometheus project there had been Dr. Vang was really the only one left of any significance. >> Of the group which came over from Prometheus (after working on that memetics project), Dr. Vang was the only one left of significance.
14:05:04
that needs a parenthetical
14:05:16Scantron
oh that works
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> he was named EKblad
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capitalization error
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14:06:16the_xenomorph666
anyone wanna review my draft?
14:06:34OmegaWarhead
wich one?
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14:07:00AidenEldritch
Hi Len
14:07:14shaggydredlocks
o/ I has (awesome) Tale if anyone has the time to read it/lend opinion. http://scpsandbox2.wikidot.com/shaggydredlocks-psae-series
14:07:23Scantron
the flashback starting with "But why can't I come with you?"
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 doesn't have its title centered and there's an italicization error partway through it
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> Whatever he was doing in Kyoto.
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sentence fragment
14:08:30@Roget
some of the sentence fragments and such things are bits yet unwritten
14:08:43Scantron
ahh
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"a researcher had been selected to be" should be "a researcher who had been selected to be"
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14:10:42OmegaWarhead
do someone know, if there is already something like an energy leak or hole on website?
14:11:04
planning to write an scp :D
14:11:12@Roget
that's not very specific
14:11:18shaggydredlocks
^
14:11:23Scantron
you're actually including kim jong-un in a tale and giving him dialogue
14:11:24weryllium
Yes. Need a little more specificity
14:11:25Scantron
absolute madman
14:11:42OmegaWarhead
will be will be
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14:11:43DrMagnus
OmegaWarhead: "energy leak"?
14:11:51@Roget
Scantron: lol thanks
14:12:02
do you like the description of the inner sanctum
14:12:19OmegaWarhead
well a kind of orb wich let vanish energy out of this universe
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14:12:42OmegaWarhead
special containment procedures already done
14:13:02shaggydredlocks
Roget: An SCP-14-whatever the number tale? Or something for the Broken Masquerade canon? Something else?
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14:13:18@Roget
shaggydredlocks: resurrection story
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follow up to
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.tale I was not magnificent
14:13:30OmegaWarhead
no an article in series 3
14:13:33%jarvis
roget: I Was Not Magnificent (written 2 years ago by Roget; rating: +46) - http://www.scp-wiki.net/i-was-not-magnificent
14:13:43Scantron
Roget: yeah
14:13:47
> Vang comes across as arrogant but highly intelligent. Also a communist.
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14:13:56Scantron
> at some point Vang refers to himself as a 'manic meme master'
14:14:01AidenEldritch
hi Thetataur
14:14:01Thetataur
Has anyone seen Decibelle?
14:14:05Scantron
gee i wonder where you're getting characterization ideas from
14:14:05Thetataur
Hello, Aiden
14:14:16AidenEldritch
Deci's not in 19, though I think you might find her in 17 later on
14:14:18@Roget
I dunno
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:D
14:14:25Thetataur
Okay. Thanks.
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14:16:03Scantron
lol but yeah i enjoy it
14:16:08shaggydredlocks
OmegaWarhead: What kind of energy? It just an orb, or something? Terrestrial? In space?
14:16:24
Still pretty vague
14:16:52@Roget
cool I'm glad it merits your approval