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- Hello TS720p, I am Tayter_Kat and I will e reviewing your plot...
- Building:
- You Need more depth in your building. It looks like you have started adding some at the top of your buildings, but add more throughout to make it flow better and make it more appealing.
- Terrain/Organics:
- Well the terrain looks good, but it is a tiny bit flat in some areas. Adding to the hills or making craters might add more to it, but that is just me being a bit picky. Your trees are very nice, But maybe add more around the plot, but that is also me bine more picky.
- Everything else looks great! Good luck <3
- -Tayter_Kat
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