[quote]Edna had gotten in trouble and had Lupines hunting her down after a fledgeling gave away the location of her haven. She ordered a blood hunt on the fledgeling and her sire. Now Edna had to, either leave town or rise up against the wolves. First thing she did was make Percy her diplomat, [color=red]she self-isolated herself in her house[/color] and sent Percy to do all types of work for her. He was sent to the prince, Edmund the fifth, a Ventrue, who called a blood hunt on all the Lupines. Soon, the place was flooded in by all sorts of Lupine hunters due to a bounty on their pack's leader. After the wolves had calmed down, Edna came out of her [color=red]voluntary torpor[/color] and thanked Percy. Edna left for her business and left Percy in the house who was sleeping.[/quote]
Things won't make sense here...
• First.. if the werewolves know the location of her place, why would she hide in there?

• Second, what self-voluntary torpor? what? when the hell did that happen? and why? on top of that it makes 0 sense to torpor yourself in a location the werewolves are about to attack.