Age: 16
Name: Forge
Height: 5 ft 4
Weight: 110
Weapon: Bow and arrow + Gauntlet capable of firing poison pins.
Personality: Trustworthy, naïve, Is a real-deal tree-hugger.
Strength: Has keen eyesight
Weaknesses: He is naïve and too trustworthy, also lacks any decent hand-to-hand combat skills

While he was a younger child, he often enjoyed the essence of nature.  He loved, and still loves, nature.  Often he would head off to the meadow and enjoy the simple pleasures of the world.  The Flowers in
bloom and the animals and birds who called the meadow their home, were all his models for an ideal world.
The mere idea of a mechanized world was appalling to the young lad.  One afternoon, while enjoying the splendor of the world, there happened to be an earthquake of frightening proportions.  The strength of the quake was able to rip the earth in two. Poor young lad was hanging precariously off the edge of the freshly split ground.  Life, which had seemed to simple, so beautiful, was about to end.
He was saved by a man who later taught him the ways of an Archer.  This man, who had just saved him, had recently fought the Villain of the story.  The villain had beaten the hell out the man, and nearly killed him.  He had just barely escaped the Villain’s wrath, however he was poisoned. However, this poison would not kill him immediately; it would take years to actually kill him. It would start by deteriorating his muscles, then, with time, take away his five senses. After that was done, it would work on his mind. Bit by bit the man would crumble.  He would deteriorate both mentally and physically until death. Yes, he may have escaped death in the battle, but before the poison fully spreads, he would have wished for death years before.
            Anyways, this guy had saved the lil lads life and taught him how to be an archer. Annnd, yeah, that’s about it bro.
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                                                Possible Twists:
·The mentor was an old commander of the Villains army.


Details of the Archer
The archer is the first member of the hero’s party. He’s a suck-up and ends up boosting the hero’s ego immensely.

Possible Names for the characters.
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I am Forge, from the
I am Ballius, from the
I am   Crogar, from the Dark Kingdom
King Plostabul

Girl Names
Knierdra, (sounds like nee-air-dra)
Asora
Kyninthia- princess of the Winged Shees- move with the wind, don't know they are there until you find something is missing

Cities
The city of Malice
The city of Carcun

land of Skaul
land of Hetamus





Age: 19
Name: Ballius (It just sounds awesome, does it not?)
Height: 5’8
Weight: 148
Weapon: Flamburg (A magic relic-sword, mainly acts as a catalyst for Heroes Divine Magic.)
Personality: Head strong, reckless, optimistic, charismatic.
Strength: Wields Divine Magic, good luck, morally strong, above-average physical strength
Weaknesses: Quick to trust, a little slow on the uptake during situations.


Ballius is the hero of the story. He wields Divine Magic, and eventually uses it to combat the villain of the story.  Ballius once lived in a small tight-knit community, where there were no strangers and everyone lived as a family.  There he lived in peace with his younger siblings and his childhood friend, whom he was soon to wed.  He worked the farms with the other men of the village, and was equal amongst the best of hunters.  The villain of the story had destroyed his village, his family, his friends and his lover as well.  At that moment, Ballius swore an oath of revenge against the villain.  He goes through trials and tribulations, overcoming all who oppose him, learning along the way, to defeat the villain.  With every challenge which presents itself, and is overcome, Ballius grows.  Physical growth, as well as emotional growth, is portrayed throughout the story as Ballius struggles to survive.  Ballius is gifted with Divine Magic by Asora, the village’s goddess.  Ballius struggles, repeatedly, through the story, to gain full control over this magic, gifted to him by Asora.  Shortly after Ballius finds his village destroyed, King Plostabul and his men arrive.  King Plostabul recognizes the meaning of Ballius’s magic at once.  He sends Ballius on a quest to obtain the four Tomes of legend.  King Plostabul tells Ballius that located inside of these Tomes is information regarding the Divine Magic.  As Ballius progresses his journey for the Tomes, and eventually the defeat of the villain, several people join his quest.  These individuals are all gifted with a specific style of combat and techniques which prove themselves useful to Ballius.  Ballius eventually obtains all four of the Tomes of Legend, and then fights with the enemy.  The battle is long and hard with Ballius as the victor. However, with new information, given to him from the enemy, will Ballius be able to maintain his mission? Will he cave and become the very thing he destroyed?  Will he become the physical manifestation of hate in the world?  Well, don’t worry; neither you nor I know the answer to this question. Hopefully, though, it will be answered soon.
Possible Twists in the Story

·Ballius finds his lover he once thought dead. She is, however, a spy for the villain.
·The villain, as it turns out, is Ballius’s brother.
·Ballius, after defeating his brother, gains the villains powers. These powers corrupt Ballius, turning him into the very thing he sought to destroy.
·Ballius is not human; rather, he is a member of a long-forgotten race? Nah I might not add that.





















Age: 27
Name: Crogar
Height: 6 ft
Weight: 148
Weapon: Dual Daggers
Personality: Pessimistic, easily agitated and tends to view things in a realistic manner.
Strength: Highly agile, remarkably strong, Immunity to poisons, can manipulate people into doing small tasks.
Weaknesses: His personality, distrusting, has the villain as an enemy.

Crogar was a high ranked official in the enemy’s army.  However, Crogar disliked the needless slaughter which the enemy had a tendency to demand.  Eventually Crogar could not handle the mental trauma inflicted through these deeds and sought for a way to redeem for his sins.  He left the enemy’s encampment and pursued a life without sins. He vowed to never kill again, as well as a path of redemption.  Crogar assists Ballius throughout the story. Eventually Crogar joins Ballius and his companions, though he’s never trusted by everyone, and guides Ballius and the crew through the Land of Malice to the enemy’s base. Crogar’s past is clouded in mystery and not revealed.

Possible Twists

· Anything and everything. Crogar is fairly under-developed at the moment. More will be added later.



































Age: 18
Name:
Height: 5’6
Weight: 120
Weapon: Elfin Bracelet (?) transforms into a variety of weapons (?) Can summon small elemental spirits to aid in battle, has minor healing abilities.
Personality: Kind, motherly and gentle, weeps over the death of even the smallest of creatures.
Strength:
Weaknesses:

 Is an elfin princess. She assists Ballius and his crew in defeating the villain.  Her character is under-developed. She aids Ballius and the rest of the crew in sealing the enemies 2nd form. Which makes her a powerful ally in the war.   She is not introduced until the later part of the story.  She has minor healing abilities, can summon smaller, weaker, elemental spirits for aid.  Not much is known about her at the present.

Possible Twists

·Anything, seeing as how she’s under-developed.  It’s open season with this character.











































































 The Story Up To Now.

The Ballius Searches for several tomes, each Tome containing new knowledge for the hero to use against the evil enemy. The books When found, absorb into the hero knowledge on how to use his divine powers.
There are four tomes in all, each tome uploads a new ability into Ballius, as well as increased understandings of his powers.
Later in the story, towards the end, the enemy finds out of Ballius's search for the mystic Tomes. He sends his minions to stop the Hero in his quest. However, he's only able to prevent Ballius from obtaining the fourth, and final tome.
In the final battle, between Ballius and the enemy, the enemy pulls out the Tome he was able to secure before Ballius was. He decides it would be interesting to defeat Ballius with his own weapon. So, he attempts to absorb the Tomes power. Thankfully though, the enemy is unable to absorb the Tome. While struggling with it, Ballius's teammates gather around and are able to get the Tome away from the enemy.  Ballius obtains it, and goes into a trance. The Final Tome installs upon Ballius an epic hand-to-hand combat ability which allows him to fight the enemy on equal terms.


1st Tome: Taiou (It's going to allow Ballius to use divine powers, although he can't use it at will, it does pop up from time to time to save him in battles.)
2md Tome: Tome of the moon (Not entirely sure what this one will do, but it should be nice)
3rd: Toem of magicks (Again, not sure on the abilities awakend through this Tome.)
4th: Toem of destruction (This Tome installs an epic hand-to-hand combat style into the user.)

Flamburg-sort of amplifies Ballius's divine powers. It's a magical relic-sword obtained by the hero in the story. It's not all that sharp, however, it is useful as a catalyst to amplify Ballius's powers in earlyer chapters of the story.

As the story progresses, Ballius will come across several companions; Archer, Black Mage, Rouge, and an Sexy Elf Princess (Who has minor healing and summoning abilities). The Archer acts like Ballius's bitch, supports his every action and views him almost as royalty, and is also the first companion of Ballius. He tends to boost Ballius's ego beyond what it should be.


The Rouge used to be in the Upper Ranks of the enemy's army. However, due to the mental trauma inflicted by killing thousands of defenseless people, he fled the enemy's troups and became who he is today.  Seeing as how he has experience with the enemy's Shadow realm, he acts sort of like a tour guide. He leads Ballius and the other companions through the Shadow Realm, and ultimately to the enemy himself.  Upon Ballius's encounter with the Rouge, Ballius is one cocky sonuvabitch.  He has an high and mighty air to him, feels as if he's the strongest mo-fo around, and ultimately get's his ass kicked by the rouge, whereupon the Rouge tells him to chill the fuck down and think about shit. After this ass whippin, Ballius becomes more modest, and ultimately a better person.

Towards the end of the story, near the final batter, the continents countries band togather in order to assist Ballius and Comrads in defeating the enemy. They send all their troops to the Shadow Realm with Ballius and attack enemy's army head on.  This creates an opening for Ballius to sneak past, as well as making it possible to attack the enemy without his hoards of minions to worry about.

The Enemy's highest ranked goon is in charge of the legions fighting against the countries armies. He soon figures out that the frontal attack is just a feint, with the main focus being on the fight with the enemy. He abandons his post mid fight, and rushes to the enemy's aide. Little does he know, that it's both too late for helping the enemy, and in his running away, the legion of goons are all defeated by the Countries army.




Earlyer in the story, the enemy sends his six dragon commanders to attack Ballius. The first of which is a Dragon speciallizing in ambushes. He hides underground, waiting for his prey, then surprise attacks. He has high defence abilities, but low offensive.

another dragon which is sent to defeat Ballius  is a Dragon which wields the ability to controll plants and use them as weapons, he's sort of OP'd but is compensated by Ballius's Ex-Lover being with this dragon in the original attack. Later on, though, Ballius manages to make his ex-lover realize that she did love him. Upon this realization, she jumps in front of the would-be-fatal-attack-to him, and takes it herself. In her dying words she retells tails of their love, and gives him a pendent to wear before she dies (This pendent, little does Ballius know, has the ability to seal the enemy's dragon form).


Another dragon sent by the enemy has abilities which allow him have a complete 360 degree view of his surroundings, has a high offense, and dwells in shadows.  He is encountered while Ballius and team are in a cave-system searching for the Tome of Moons.  The only way to defeat this dragon is by luring it to a source of light. This is done by Ballius reaching the Tome of Moons, when he does, he begins to resonate light. This light is deadly to all beings of the shadows. This, in turn, weakens the dragon to its limits, and is ultimately defeated by the archer's arrow *Being blessed by Ballius* By the way, the dragon had the ability to breathe flames fused with powerfull shadow-spells.

In the begining of the story, after Ballius got pwnt by the enemy, and is transfered to the king of some country, the king lets Ballius know that the beast which attacked him was a special divine-beast. It imbued its powers into him, and he must collect the four sacred Tomes from around the country in order to fully use the divine magic.  The first task is departing from the kings castle to the mountains and obtain the tome of Taiou.
Upon obtaining the Tome of Taiou, Ballius is able to use divine powers. However, he's not able to use them at will. Only when he's in extreme danger does this power reviel itself. Later on, though, when he collects more Tomes, he's able to use his powers more freely.

After collecting the Tome of Taiou, he heads back to the castle. On his way back, he comes across Archer. Archer and Ballius meet by chance, when Archer nearly shoots Ballius mistaking him for an animal.  Ballius tells the lad he's headed back to town, and Archer decides to join him since he's going that way too.  On their way back to town, Ballius and Archer stumble across some low-level goons from the enemy, possibly on search for the Tome, and engage in battle with Ballius and Archer. This is the first battle in which Ballius's divine powers are shown.  Archer, seeing these powers, becomes obsessed with him and says he'll aid in his journey.



Final battle, Mage casts a spell which slows the enemy down. the enemy thinks that Ballius's
speed increases dramatically from Mage's spell. However, it's his own speed which slowes. the enemy realizes this pretty soon, seeing as how he's an HCH *High Class Hoe*, but too late. By the time he realizes he's been slowed, it's too late, he's taken too much damage to remain in this form.
So, the enemy activated his 2nd form and calls upon his sword to aid him in battle. He loses his armour, but is bestowed robes which protect from any elemental spell. His defensive abilities are lowered, yet speed, attack, and magick abilities are increased.  Mage's spell becomes obsolete in face of the enemy's transformation, and thus ceases to work.

In the enemy's second form the Hero and team rejoice in finally getting rid of his armour. The elf princess performs the ritual sealing of his sword, thus, removing all attribute gains bestowed upon him. His strength, magick, as well as speed lower back to normal. His armour, though, does not return. He keeps his elemental protection robes.  In his powerless form, Ballius and team proceed to kick the enemy's ass! Lol, srsly.

After a while of getting his ass kicked, the enemy releases some of the last of his energy, and transforms into a dragon.  In this form,  he has all the abilities of his six dragon commanders. Such as the ability to control plants, the 360 viewing area, the incredible defense, shadows for offensive boost, etc....
The Transformed enemy sets something off with Ballius's amulet given to him by his Lover before her death. He holds it out and it somehow-or-anther seals the enemy's draconic form, thus, reverting him to his Armour-less form. From there, he got owned?