Illinosx

Hello Illinosx, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...

Structure:
   This is anything from houses to castles to sheds. You house is alright, but it is lacking some depth and detail. Depth is the layers within a structure. You can add depth to a build by adding fences, slabs, and stairs to a build. You can add detail to a build, by adding trap doors and buttons, to the house as well. This will make your build more interesting and stand out more:)

Organics:
   This is anything living, like trees and animals. I see you have a tree on your plot, and it looks great for your rank. This is just a recommendation, but I would add more leaves to the tree to make the trunk and leaves proportional. This is to make it more real, instead of a hugs tree and two leaves on it. Also, get rid of the notch, bone meal, tree next to your house as it does not match the other tree. You can add another tree like the one on the hill.

Terrain:
   This is anything involving the ground. Your plot is alright, but there are some flat areas on it, You can add some small hils and craters to it to make it more interesting.

Good Luck<3
Tayter_Kat  |  Octovon Jr Mod