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  1. Aug 25 14:44:04 <Soulless> Do you have examples
  2. Aug 25 14:44:06 <Soulless> of crit
  3. Aug 25 14:44:34 <Fingo7> Ok, coming up
  4. Aug 25 14:48:09 <Fingo7> "
  5. Aug 25 14:48:12 <Fingo7> Another is:
  6. Aug 25 14:48:54 <Fingo7> "Having to try and read this through my limited French and google translate for a simple comedic gimmick doesn't work in the slightest. As said above, not much here but the queens talking about a big war, I'm not getting much to care about apart from "it's big, so it must be important".
  7. Aug 25 14:49:09 <Fingo7> All and all it seems a bit bland, there isn't really much here to upvote on. -1"
  8. Aug 25 14:49:33 <Fingo7> As you can see they have become more short and straight-to-the-point as time has progressed
  9. Aug 25 14:49:44 <Fingo7> I just find it to be both more efficient and effective
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