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- Hello wortelke10!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today! Lets start off with your structure.
- Your structure has a nice frame, roof, and has some decent depth but the detailing is a little weird. It looks like a modernish kind of detailing with a medieval like build which doesnt go well together. Try to incorporate stairs/slabs and such to detail. ./warp depthtutorial for reference.
- Your tree is nice especially since its custom made. You added the branches and roots as well which is very guud. :D
- Your terrain has some nice hills a hood river going on, but its a little flat because of the grass blocks. Try to add block variation such as green clay, green wool, cobblestone, gravel ,etc.
- Overall, I think your plot is good but it has a lot of extra space. Try adding maybe another structure or more trees or both. :D Keep up the good work and I hope you rank up with your next submission! :D
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