xDraghun

Dgirlz9 Plot Review

Jul 21st, 2015
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  1. Hello Dgirlz9!
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  3. My name is xDraghun and today i will be reviewing your plot. Lets start off with your structures.
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  5. You structure is lacking detail, depth, and color. Right now, its basically a white rectangular box. The panes dont really make up for the color. Try adding more blocks for detailing and color such as stairs/slabs. I recommend using stone related blocks. For more reference, do ./warp depthtutorial.
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  7. Your tree is pretty nice and shows effort especially since its custom made, but I would like to see more trees based on how much space you have on your plo.t Next time, try adding branches/ leaves to ur tree for a more realistic and detailed effect.
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  9. Your terrain has some pretty smooth hills but its a little plain and flat. Try to add more blocks to ur terrain for variation, such as green clay, cobblestone. Your underground layer is pretty nice, but isnt really accounted for since it is concealed from the rest of the plot. Make the bottom of your pond sand/sandstone and add sugar cane/flowers around it for color and detail.
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  11. I think you can put more effort and detail into your plot before I can rank you. Hope you have a better chance with your next submission and Good Luck! :D
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