Not a member of Pastebin yet?
Sign Up,
it unlocks many cool features!
- Novice Review:
- Nice plot so far, but theres some things you should work on before you rank up.
- Since organics are the main focus on the plot, ill talk about those first.
- Your trees are decent, but theyre a little too rough right now. Smooth them out and make them more tree like. The lime wool and glass takes away from the realism of the trees. Perhaps use regular leaves in place of them.
- The turtle in the middle of the plot needs some work. At the moment ,its very boxy and unrealistic. Try to smooth it out and make it more fluid. The shell is very flat so make sure to round it out, and the head is just a sphere so try and make it more turtle-like. Maybe look up some reference pictures on google of different turtles to get more of an idea :)
- Your structures are decent, but they need more detail and depth. Also, if you arent going to do interior, at least black out the windows so people cant see inside. It might also be a good idea to make the structures bigger or have more of them around the plot.
- Your terrain is too smooth and too flat. Try to rough it up a bit more and make it more natural looking.
- Hope this helps, good luck!
Advertisement
Add Comment
Please, Sign In to add comment
