Tayter_Kat

JimJamBoy9999

Jul 11th, 2015
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  1. Hello JimJamBoy9999, I am Tayter_Kat and I will be reviewing your plot...
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  3. Structure:
  4. This is anything from towers to houses to barns. You have a couple of builds, but they are all lacking depth. Depth is the layers within a structure to make it seem more realistic. You can add stairs, trap doors, buttons, slabs, and fences into or onto the structure. Also, when choosing blocks, make sure you have a chosen pallet. Pallet means the blocks you choose to build that fit under the same categories, such as natural or modern.
  5. Organics:
  6. This is anything living, like animals or trees. you have a tree, but it looks a bit sad. to make it happy again, try adding more leaves to the branches, but make the branches less flat and long. shorten the branches and add a bit more leaves.
  7. Terrain:
  8. This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. Majority of the ground is flat, so try adding more craters and hill all around your plot.
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  10. Good Luck<3!
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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