Tayter_Kat

ThatPotatoIsSpy

Aug 22nd, 2015
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  1. Hello there ThatPotatoIsSpy, This is your initiate review....
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  3. Structures:
  4. This is anything from houses to towers to castles. You have two structures but the depth is a bit sloppy. Depth is the layers within a structure. You can add, or fix, depth by incorporating slabs, trap doors, buttons, stairs, and fences. I recomed going to /warp depthtutorial. This shows an example of how to add depth and some ways of not adding depth.
  5. Terrain:
  6. This is anything involving the ground, like hills and cliffs. Your terrain is not flat, which is great! On the other hand, it looks a bit sloppy on block choice. I recommend making it all similar throughout the plot, with a bit of variation here and there. You have it in a big section, which looks unrealistic.
  7. Organics:
  8. This is anything living, like animals and trees. You have some trees, and they are decent enough for you to pass. I recommend ,for future notice, that you try to make it more proportional. A real tree does not have a rhyme or reason on which way its going, but it does flow well.
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  10. Fix the thing mentioned above and you are good to go! Good Luck<3
  11. Tayter_Kat | Octovon Mod
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