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- Hello Daniposvi!
- My name is xDraghun and I will be reviewing your plot today. I can already start out by saying that your plot is missing 2 essential parts which are organics and terrain, but lets talk about your structure first.
- I like the basic concept of your structure but as of now, its really plain and dull. Your castle needs depth and detail. Depth is the layering of different blocks to add more detail to a structure. I would suggest using stonebrick related blocks, or wood related blocks. The wood will really add color to your gray structure. Also, try not to use the same blocks. Switch it up a bit. Maybe you could use andesite, clay, or maybe even mossy cobble. Adding extra blocks will add variation to your structure.
- For your organics, try adding some trees because they are the most common and easiest organic for an initiate to make. Make sure to keep in mind to add branches, roots, and air holes in the leaves to add a realistic feel to the tree. You can even take the extra step by adding apples to your tree by getting a steve head from your creative inv and doing ./skull MHF_Apple. For your terrain, your should build some small hills since your castle already takes up a majority of the plot. When making your terrain, dont stick to just grass blocks. Use other blocks that match your palette to add variation and detail to your terrain so it isnt so flat and dull.
- I have decided that I won't be ranking your plot as of yet. Keep in mind the suggestions I have given you and I hope you have a better chance with your next submission. Good Luck!!!
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